How could I love you the wrong way

How could I love you the wrong way

A Poem by ~Sarah~ Idríel The Fair

I know you and yet I would like to know you better.


 I've seen the different colors of your eyes.


I've hold your hand

 in my hand

  and felt I'll never

   be whole without you.


 How could I love you the wrong way?


How could this be wrong?


 Your smile brings me joy, your eyes dazzle me.


When all turned in this direction?


 The thousands ways to love you.


Now and always

I've lost myself,

 drowned myself

  in your inner self.


How could I love you the wrong way?

© 2014 ~Sarah~ Idríel The Fair


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I like the emotional struggle and thoughts in the poem. We will always question love.
"How could I love you the wrong way?
How could this be wrong?
Your smile brings me joy, your eyes dazzle me.
When all turned in this direction?
The thousands ways to love you."
The above lines are amazing. I could set-up a complete new poem with these thoughts. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote


Posted 10 Years Ago


~Sarah~ Idríel The Fair

10 Years Ago

Thank you!

"I could set-up a complete new poem with these thoughts."

Th.. read more
A questioning poem you have given us this morning, Sarah, and by the sound of it you may have doubts about falling in love, because no matter that "I've seen the different colors of your eyes." Maybe there is something within his eye that makes you pause on love's threshold.

Posted 10 Years Ago



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~Sarah~ Idríel The Fair
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