Why are you running too fast
Like a Cheetah, your legs are moving too slow I see
The pressure heart can't hold any more
You are breathless, carrying wild wind of thoughts
Never think of escaping, running through the path you selected
You are caged in a narrow haunting memories of mine
Inside your tears are fire floating over cheeks
Hold my hand, tightly, gently
You feel, you are not living any more
You are now at heaven,
Tears are river's of heaven
Blood seems colourful, heart like blooming flower
Thoughts are murmurs of angels
As you hug me forever, not to live on this earth.
Great words, imagery, flow, meaning... Everything is in this poem!
"Tears are river's of heaven
Blood seems colourful, heart like blooming flower
Thoughts are murmurs of angels
As you hug me forever, not to live on this earth." HOLY
This reminded me a song but I can't remember now, I'll let you know later! Felt so familiar!
In favorites for sure. I love these kinda poems
such a warm poem, soothes your heart. Heaven is the place to be, what descriptions and imagery with words. this is so calming to read and lose yourselves in those thoughts. this is gentle and kind, reassures and yes we all need that. thanks for sharing, dear TP.
Arundass TP you relate so well to the emotions, dear poet.
So many times I've caught myself having those thoughts like a wild wind.
It definitely leads to pressure the heart can't hold anymore.
I wish you could've reached out and grabbed me, stopped me...
But we all are impulsive at times...What a great Write!
I guess we should all live in Heaven, it's much more sane than living on earth...and better than having haunted memories!!! " Blood seems colorful, heart like blooming flower".....vivid images!
Thank you for sharing
Warmly, B
Posted 3 Weeks Ago
3 Weeks Ago
Sure...We all must make our mind with heavenly touch. Thank you friend 😊
Caged in memories. Some wonderful lines and imagery here. Grief can certainly take prisoners. Hopefully over time, that grief will soften and the memories will gift joy and not so many tears. Great poem Arundass.
A dialectic is formed in this poem where opposites make up the whole and where one imprisons in memory what one can not hold in reality. Memories hold tightly but gently and live forever. A deep and wonderful poem
Great words, imagery, flow, meaning... Everything is in this poem!
"Tears are river's of heaven
Blood seems colourful, heart like blooming flower
Thoughts are murmurs of angels
As you hug me forever, not to live on this earth." HOLY
This reminded me a song but I can't remember now, I'll let you know later! Felt so familiar!
In favorites for sure. I love these kinda poems