Lucky moments

Lucky moments

A Poem by Arundass TP
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Really lucky

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The Bear behind the tree never noticed my presence,
The Lions walking never noticed my presence
The Wild dogs ran fast unnoticed
Elephants passed in front of me unnoticed
Walked over a poisonous snake without touching it's fangs
Scorpions crawled over my legs ran to darkness
Ghosts and vampires skipped my presence
Sitting alone in the darkness silent
Silence is the only powerful weapon I have
To wage war without harming
Felt how lucky I got that weapon.
While Vulture's sat boring on tree top
Roaming and circling around my body
Until time exists.

© 2025 Arundass TP


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You were really lucky... with those beasts running in front of you and never noticing you...wow, you must be some kind of invisible person...or they know how sweet and calm you are and not afraid of them....you describe these beasts in a vivid, thoughtful way.....very clever!
Warmly, B

Posted 2 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Arundass TP

2 Days Ago

Thank you friend 😊
Betty Hermelee

1 Day Ago

You are very welcome!!!
Warmly, B



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A fun read!
Silence works wonders when you want to stay unnoticed.
Last line remind us luck isn't always in our side.

Posted 42 Minutes Ago


You were really lucky... with those beasts running in front of you and never noticing you...wow, you must be some kind of invisible person...or they know how sweet and calm you are and not afraid of them....you describe these beasts in a vivid, thoughtful way.....very clever!
Warmly, B

Posted 2 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Arundass TP

2 Days Ago

Thank you friend 😊
Betty Hermelee

1 Day Ago

You are very welcome!!!
Warmly, B
Excellent work. I enjoyed it.

Posted 2 Days Ago


Arundass TP

2 Days Ago

Thank you friend 😊
The last lines seem to indicate the speaker is deceased. Indeed, dead bodies have no fear of being attacked.

Posted 3 Days Ago


Arundass TP

3 Days Ago

Ha, ha, ha... Thank you friend 😊
Honey Pie, Let me tell Ya! I think I could hide from everything EXCEPT GHOSTS and VAMPIRES!
Awesome presentation, friend.

Posted 3 Days Ago


Arundass TP

3 Days Ago

Maybe...Thanks for reviewing
It makes me wonder how many times unknown to me I have escaped death or harm by luck and what are the odds of all this happening. I am aware of several times after the fact. A very thought provoking write my friend.

Posted 3 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Arundass TP

3 Days Ago

Thank you friend 😊
Great Work ATP. Luck is a valuable commodity indeed, and I hope yours never runs out. Really Excellent ✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️

Posted 3 Days Ago


Arundass TP

3 Days Ago

Thank you friend 😊
This was very interesting;
I never looked at it this way.
I notice your poetry.

Posted 4 Days Ago


Arundass TP

4 Days Ago

Thank you friend 😊
Sami Khalil

3 Days Ago

You are welcome Arundas

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Added on March 26, 2025
Last Updated on March 27, 2025
Tags: Poetry, silence, luck

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Arundass TP
Arundass TP

Thalassery, Kerala, India



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