How to kill a person

Within seconds

I will kill a person
For a moment
Showing blue sky so vast
With spectrum of colors redrawn.

I can kill a person
For a moment
Drawing line infinite
To show the end of the line existing.

I killed a person
In a second when the clock needle moves
With my sharpened tongue
Splitting life into tiny pieces.​

Reviews

[Beren]

When I first read the title I gasped. Sir. Go easy on us people, please.
But the poem is great as always. This reminded me “ You can kill someone in your heart. Stop loving them. And one day they die.” from the My Sweet Orange Tree. Words have power to kill.

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[Kady R.]

I love this poem!! It definitely is a shift in perspective. As they say the power is in the tongue. How powerful do we use our tongue? To build up or to destroy? What happens when using a tongue to destroy? You can destroy a person with it! Wonderful answers to the many questions of life. Thankkkksss🤗🤗🤗🤗

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[phoebe wells]

a very well worded poem, veiled in meaning. thank you for sharing your work with the world 🌷

[Arundass TP]

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[1809 Black Plague Decem..]

Love the depiction and the whole part of time and the manner of ill will, great write! ---Maynard

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[1809 Black Plague December]

Most Welcome Dear, Very Vivid the dispriction, :D Maynard

[Soren]

My take on this poem is different. I see killing a person as killing the old person and changing their point of view making them a new person A most lovely write.

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[Manta Ray Lily]

Ohhh damn sir, you took the title of the poem on another level and I loved how you out the words together. Nice work sir!

[Arundass TP]

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[Dylan Macadham]

...of gods and time! Well spoken.

[Arundass TP]

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[Neville]

I always try to think before opening my mouth .. sometimes I forget and dare not look back at the carnage I left behind .. an intriguing poem that made me think deep .. Neville

[Arundass TP]

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[Sami Khalil]

A tongue can be a two-edged sword.
Tell me please where I can find a place to sharpen those swords?
You are waxing philosophical.

[Arundass TP]

Sure. Thank you friend

[Sami Khalil]

Yes siiiirrrr. You are welcome.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Emily Dickinson said that "words have the power to kill and have the power to heal"

I guess it is our choice which ones we wield...

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend