Eyelid

Eyelid

A Poem by Arundass TP
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The door to darkness

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Close your eyes a while
The wind of darkness ties
Feels floating through strangeness
Feeling the world like a mirage.

Forms and colors are dreams
Wishes to lit a lantern
Where wolves hide along the path
Howling to terrify the soul.

Colors are empty dreams
The sky and the earth are wonders
Touching the body, feels the existence
The mirrors are sounds and smell.

Eyes are lantern in darkness
Where eyelids doors of emptiness
Far away sun and moon
Wishing splendorous feast to the world.

© 2025 Arundass TP


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Closed eyes transfer you into a world without shape or colour. Imagine not being able to gaze at the night sky. No stars, no moon. And not being able to see the sun playing on a canopy of green leaves. This is where you transported me Arundass.

Chris

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Arundass TP

2 Days Ago

Thank you friend 😊



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The world just isn't the same with your eyes closed.....it is like a mirage, colorless, only hearing strange sounds...however open your eyes and it is a different world; one can see the universe, the sun, moon and all the colors possible... "A feast to the world"....
Lovely, TP
Warmly, B

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Arundass TP

1 Day Ago

Thank you friend. Happy New year.
Betty Hermelee

1 Day Ago

same to you!😊 always a pleasure TP
Warmly, B🌷
Liked this! Close your eyes awhile, to appreciate the Contrast. Great Message!

Posted 2 Days Ago


Arundass TP

1 Day Ago

Thank you friend 😊
Closed eyes transfer you into a world without shape or colour. Imagine not being able to gaze at the night sky. No stars, no moon. And not being able to see the sun playing on a canopy of green leaves. This is where you transported me Arundass.

Chris

Posted 2 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Arundass TP

2 Days Ago

Thank you friend 😊
Do we really or are we really able to believe what our eyes see?
It is all gone in a blink....and what about the heart....does it believe what it feels,
even for that instant?
j.

Posted 2 Days Ago


Arundass TP

2 Days Ago

Life itself is a dream. Thànk you friend
Good write... I love some of the hidden word play. It may just be my mind assigning a higher value to it than what was intended by Loved pouring over this a few times to make sure I was reading what I was into the word play. Well done indeed.

Posted 2 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Arundass TP

2 Days Ago

Thank you friend

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Added on January 3, 2025
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Thalassery, Kerala, India



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