A person within you

A person within you

A Poem by Arundass TP
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Lives within forever

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A person within you
Talks endless
When sun moves over the sky
When moon moves over the sky.

A person within you
Shows a world never existed
While you walk, thinking you live
While you sleep, thinking it's dream.

A person within you
Tells all your wishes
That you never expects
That you never demands

A person within you
Tells all lies as it is true
That you behave accordingly
That you feel accordingly.

A person within you
Hacks your existence
Takes you to the top of a mountain
Pulls you down unexpectedly.

A person within you
Is neither God nor devil
It's a clever self
Living with you forever.

© 2024 Arundass TP


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It is a very serious difficulty for a person not to trust the voice inside them or to be at odds with it. Your brain is trying to protect you and sometimes it can do this by pulling you back. Sometimes the best thing that can protect you can be the worst thing that will happen to you. So which one is the real you? Which voice is your reality? We don't know.
A perfectly written poem, sir. Thank you for sharing

Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Arundass TP

6 Days Ago

Thànk you friend 😊



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My feeling is that this amazing poem is about EGO and I wonder if I am incorrect, dear T. P.?
A very valid, purposeful write from your poetic pen. I enjoyed reading very much and thank you for sharing, dear poet... Lovely work!

Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Arundass TP

1 Week Ago

Yes, I wàs thinking about Sigmund Freud and egos while writing. Thank you friend 😊
Marie

1 Week Ago

Most welcome always, dear T. P... Great write! Thank you for sharing, dear friend...
Words on your conscience. Clever and meaningful.

Posted 1 Week Ago


Arundass TP

1 Week Ago

Thank you friend 😊

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Arundass TP
Arundass TP

Thalassery, Kerala, India



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