A person within you

Lives within forever

A person within you
Talks endless
When sun moves over the sky
When moon moves over the sky.

A person within you
Shows a world never existed
While you walk, thinking you live
While you sleep, thinking it's dream.

A person within you
Tells all your wishes
That you never expects
That you never demands

A person within you
Tells all lies as it is true
That you behave accordingly
That you feel accordingly.

A person within you
Hacks your existence
Takes you to the top of a mountain
Pulls you down unexpectedly.

A person within you
Is neither God nor devil
It's a clever self
Living with you forever.
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Reviews

[A.H.]

a very interestingly done poem, a person within a person, inner voice perhaps. the everyday, every time the voice or the other self that holds us back or pushes us further. It's a question to be or not to be. which is right, which isn't or doesn't matter. the write captures this dilemma beautifully and reminds us that there's that entity within us, always there, the presence is known but the outcomes are unknown. well done! Thanks for sharing, TP!

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[GlendaK]

Yes, your conscience is with you for your whole life. After death, the evil spirit returns to Hell and the good spirit escorts us to the Father of All Life who judges us. If we believe in Jesus, then HIS blood totally abolishes every sin for eternity! God does not and will not co-exist with sin.

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[GlendaK]

Awesome write my friend! :)

[Fia Naturie]

This is a good piece. I enjoyed the flow of it.

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[Ern M. Yoshimoto]

i remember when my therapist suddenly asked me: 'did you have an imaginary friend when you were a child?' my answer: yes... and i think he's still there. i talk to him endlessly, sometimes for hours and he provides me insights that i swear i did not think of. he is an amazing friend and mentor and i could not live without. not everyone's inner voice is like a guardian angel, but a more demonic one, as your verse explores. i guess i am lucky to have this wise and positive energy inside me.

[Arundass TP]

Sure. Thank you friend 😊

[emmajoygreen]

An admission of blatant deviousness, hiding in a fog of Thisisme! Such a fine write, however. Words in keen order, admission lone, no fee for saying the truth and - almost but.

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[emmajoygreen]

You're welcome. Need catch up with reviews.. now's the time whilst I have it!

[Marie]

My feeling is that this amazing poem is about EGO and I wonder if I am incorrect, dear T. P.?
A very valid, purposeful write from your poetic pen. I enjoyed reading very much and thank you for sharing, dear poet... Lovely work!

[Arundass TP]

Yes, I wàs thinking about Sigmund Freud and egos while writing. Thank you friend 😊

[Marie]

Most welcome always, dear T. P... Great write! Thank you for sharing, dear friend...

[Ken Simm.]

Words on your conscience. Clever and meaningful.

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊