A person within you

Lives within forever

A person within you
Talks endless
When sun moves over the sky
When moon moves over the sky.

A person within you
Shows a world never existed
While you walk, thinking you live
While you sleep, thinking it's dream.

A person within you
Tells all your wishes
That you never expects
That you never demands

A person within you
Tells all lies as it is true
That you behave accordingly
That you feel accordingly.

A person within you
Hacks your existence
Takes you to the top of a mountain
Pulls you down unexpectedly.

A person within you
Is neither God nor devil
It's a clever self
Living with you forever.
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Reviews

[A.H.]

a very interestingly done poem, a person within a person, inner voice perhaps. the everyday, every time the voice or the other self that holds us back or pushes us further. It's a question to be or not to be. which is right, which isn't or doesn't matter. the write captures this dilemma beautifully and reminds us that there's that entity within us, always there, the presence is known but the outcomes are unknown. well done! Thanks for sharing, TP!

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[MCS]

Negative self-talk is the internal voice that critiques, undermines, and second-guesses nearly every move we make. Its best to take its chatter with a grain of salt and not allow it to turn up the volume. Well done my friend.

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[Theo Addage]

I like it! There are some grammatical issues in your translations. FYI

[Arundass TP]

Ok. I will focus on it to correct. Thank you friend 😊

[Nelyn Salvaleon]

This is very well written. I really love it. Thank you for sharing this one. This resonates with me.

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[1809 Black Plague Decem..]

Dear Arundass TP,
oh, wow, yes, I agree, the fact that in ourselves or within the bounds of what is love, we must agree to disagree, and everything you say, I come to say, yeah, I see that a lot, but it doesn't have to be that way, the only problem is the discourse, love, Maynard

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[1809 Black Plague December]

Your most welcome my
Dear, I feel the treshold so strong and bounds unbinding, unllimitless comfounding, ---:) Maynard

[Ken e Bujold]

Sorry for the delay Arundass, I've been away. enjoyed the read, and the questions it challenges one to consider. Namely who is that person inside me, and what are they trying to tell me

happy new yr
ken

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[Kane Hagwood]

This poem makes me think of the Ego. The Self. The spark that follows us--that MAKES us.... US. You seem to have a dreamy way of putting your words together. There are moments I find myself rereading certain parts, searching for deeper meaning in the creative structure of your stanzas. Aside from thinking of the Ego, this makes me also consider that the poem could be talking about the Shadow Self as well. The part of us that is always with us, even when we try not to notice it. Either way, this is a thoughtful poem with colorful language--even if at times I struggle to connect the dots. Thanks for sharing this with all of us :)

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[Robert Trakofler]

The person within me is a real son of a "B" he almost never lets me finish a poem without criticizing the hell out of it first:/ My trashcan is filled with it's rejections

[Arundass TP]

We all live as a copy inside. Thank you friend

[Betty Hermelee]

Could this person within you be your alter ego? A higher voice directing your life whether good or bad… sometimes I think I have something inside me leading me on certain paths … it is very complex, should we follow that voice or not? I le the way you portrayed this concept
Warmly
B🌷

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[Chris Shaw]

That inner voice talking away, weighing things up and down.Do you listen or do you make your own decisions. Interesting read Arundass, much enjoyed.

Chris

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊