Dream

It's nothing too long

When dream comes true
Life is happy dancing on the floor
When all dream comes true
Madness swallows forgets this world
When all dream collapses
You pray to God for help
Looks the sky, to see the stars
On a sunny day too hot
Forgetting to rest under a tree
Inhaling it's cool breeze.​

Reviews

[Ern M. Yoshimoto]

all i dreamed was to live in a happy, supportive family but i am now looking to the stars and praying to god.
the first lines of the poem gave me a taste of what i am missing out on. it left an ache in my heart. but the second half reminded me that i am not alone. many of us have unfulfilled dreams or aspirations and carry around a feeling of emptiness, forgetting to rest under a tree. but i vibed with this poem. it is written exceptionally well and possesses wisdom that is not apparent at a first glance.

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend for encouraging review. Have a nice day 💗

[Jeyanthi]

This is reality... when we have everything, madness overtake us... when we have something we look onto what missing... when we have nothing, that when everything fells into an order and pray for certainty ( in tamil they tell na irrukumbothu arumai puriyathu... ) this is the insight, though we try sometimes we fail.. ( tat fail becomes often)..
Great write!!

[Jeyanthi]

We take everything for granted like stars..

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[In Em's Wonderland]

Dreams can often bring one so much clarity on a certain situation in our lives...they can be so powerful!

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend

[Betty Hermelee]

Some dreams have happy endings, but others are nightmarish and we sometimes awaken in a sweat; in that case we need to calm down, find a cool place to re-think our dream and what it meant; many of us cannot remember our dreams! Nice🌷
Warmly, B

[Arundass TP]

Thànk you friend