Dream

Dream

A Poem by Arundass TP
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It's nothing too long

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When dream comes true
Life is happy dancing on the floor
When all dream comes true
Madness swallows forgets this world
When all dream collapses
You pray to God for help
Looks the sky, to see the stars
On a sunny day too hot
Forgetting to rest under a tree
Inhaling it's cool breeze.​

© 2024 Arundass TP


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all i dreamed was to live in a happy, supportive family but i am now looking to the stars and praying to god.
the first lines of the poem gave me a taste of what i am missing out on. it left an ache in my heart. but the second half reminded me that i am not alone. many of us have unfulfilled dreams or aspirations and carry around a feeling of emptiness, forgetting to rest under a tree. but i vibed with this poem. it is written exceptionally well and possesses wisdom that is not apparent at a first glance.

Posted 1 Day Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Arundass TP

1 Day Ago

Thank you friend for encouraging review. Have a nice day 💗



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How true this poem is. We turn more when we are unhappy and troubled to our God. When we are happy, we just live in the moment. We all hope our dreams will come to fruition. Nicely penned Arundass.

Posted 21 Hours Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Arundass TP

18 Hours Ago

Thank you friend 😊
all i dreamed was to live in a happy, supportive family but i am now looking to the stars and praying to god.
the first lines of the poem gave me a taste of what i am missing out on. it left an ache in my heart. but the second half reminded me that i am not alone. many of us have unfulfilled dreams or aspirations and carry around a feeling of emptiness, forgetting to rest under a tree. but i vibed with this poem. it is written exceptionally well and possesses wisdom that is not apparent at a first glance.

Posted 1 Day Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Arundass TP

1 Day Ago

Thank you friend for encouraging review. Have a nice day 💗
You inspire us.
Check out my latest sonnet please

Posted 2 Days Ago


Arundass TP

2 Days Ago

Yes sure. Thank you friend 😊
Sami Khalil

1 Day Ago

Yes siiiirrrrr. You are welcome Arundas.
Really good work again ATP, sounds idyllic. Excellent ✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️

Posted 3 Days Ago


Arundass TP

2 Days Ago

Thank you friend 😊
This poem speaks the truth! When all is going well and we are happy, God does not enter our mind. Only when things are not going well do we turn to God to beg for help! So few ever give thanks for the help they receive, sadly. A very inspiring, insightful poem which tells the reader to enjoy life, but not to forget about his/her God too. Lovely work, dear T. P... Thank you for sharing...

Posted 3 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Arundass TP

3 Days Ago

Thank you friend 😊
Marie

3 Days Ago

Most welcome always, dear poet...
This is reality... when we have everything, madness overtake us... when we have something we look onto what missing... when we have nothing, that when everything fells into an order and pray for certainty ( in tamil they tell na irrukumbothu arumai puriyathu... ) this is the insight, though we try sometimes we fail.. ( tat fail becomes often)..
Great write!!


Posted 4 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jeyanthi

4 Days Ago

We take everything for granted like stars..
Arundass TP

3 Days Ago

Thank you friend 😊
Dreams can often bring one so much clarity on a certain situation in our lives...they can be so powerful!

Posted 4 Days Ago


Arundass TP

4 Days Ago

Thank you friend
Some dreams have happy endings, but others are nightmarish and we sometimes awaken in a sweat; in that case we need to calm down, find a cool place to re-think our dream and what it meant; many of us cannot remember our dreams! Nice🌷
Warmly, B

Posted 4 Days Ago


Arundass TP

4 Days Ago

Thànk you friend

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Added on November 10, 2024
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Arundass TP
Arundass TP

Thalassery, Kerala, India



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