Rainbow

The colors of heaven

When she lies on the blue sky nude
Over the clouds, when the Sun kisses
Poet's sing a song over her beautiful colours
Looking the sky cloudy, standing over the mountain.

She never lies there long, she is blurred
Into the heavens, dancing allover
She lies visual only when sun is emotional
Touching her body to taste heavenly colours.

Seeing, dreaming, Poet's search for word's
Unlocking the abyss of soul,
Heats it,  cools it adding honey and Nectar
Gives the world to quench the eternal thirst

Reviews

[Jeyanthi]

The Poet living in a beautiful place it seems 😅...
To me the poem itself saying two ideas.. "The sun masculine do have qualities of feminine that is gently exposed when there is to be time"....
Other way is ..." it just for a moment, but remainders are in our memory "...
It's like exploration...

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[Fia Naturie]

"Seeing, dreaming, Poet's search for word's
Unlocking the abyss of soul"
to find that perfect word to drive home the feeling is what we strive for. Lovely

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[Mr Question]

Of all your poems this calmed me the most. I long to speak with rainbows after reading it.

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[Aarti Sriram]

‘She lies visual only when sun is emotional’ a very creative imagination and my favourite line. What a colourful poem. Your rendering leaves a permanent poise about an ephemeral rainbow dear @Arundass

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[Betty Hermelee]

I can only imagine these amazing words you created when you think what heaven looks like and it is simply gorgeous...." she lies visual only when the sun is emotional"....great line....
Thank you TP for sharing this very visual poem...

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[Ern M. Yoshimoto]

this is a great meta-poem, talking about what inspires poetry. nature, beauty, love are certainly things everybody gets inspiration from. Poet's search for words, to try and use their vocabulary to describe the magnificence they bear witness to, is a challenge undertaken with joy. but people are always wanting and wanting 'to quench the eternal thirst...' very well said, and very well written. this is as beautiful as a rainbow.

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[GlendaK]

"she is blurred into the heavens"..."touching her body to taste heavenly colours"..I don't think I've ever read such beauty! This is chilling with its sensual flickers. I love it!

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend

[Pete]

excellent work. i was taken away with your words and imagery. such depth. wonderful and much enjoyed.

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[Ken e Bujold]

Yes the wonderment of a sky's multitude of colors is definitely a poet's palette.

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[John the Baptist]

ATP, I am definitely going to look at the sky more carefully after reading this one.

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend. Sky's are like magician changing colors. Have a nice day.