Changing Colours

To peaceful world

Alone the beach was heaven
A lady painted ocean Red
Sketched a dense jungle in my mind
Full of carnivorous Birds and animals.

She blessed me touching my head
To lead all the carnivorous
To rage into enemy camp
Until they are all skelton and broken.

She painted grey hue over and over
Where millions of stars and galaxies live
Then clear blue sky with millions of colours
Stars and galaxies hidden behind.

She blessed again with her artistic talent
The jungles transformed into grassland
Where herbivores saw it as paradise
Where I slept with pallets and brushes, she gave...​

Reviews

[schlanks]

Your writing always intrigues the imagination. Ocean Red, skelton and broken carnivores, pallets and brushes... they all work together to give your work a sense of vastness. Enjoyed the read.

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[Vol]

Andrus,
Like a "primitive" style painting. this does a delightful job of capturing a moment of discovery, one where art and life come together. A nice read.
Vol

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[Ken Simm.]

The aesthetics of Mother Nature. Exceptional.

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[Jules]

the imagery! felt like i was on that beach with you

[Senu Jayasinghe]

Magical imagery. The best kind of poetry.

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[Dave W.]

I really liked this, I was there on that beach, in that jungle. Great imagery....

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[Tumi]

This poem is amazing! It takes you on a wild journey from violence to peace, with vivid images and creative ideas. you used colors and nature while painting a powerful picture

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[Robert Trakofler]

no coma in your chroma Mr. TP

[Arundass TP]

Thànk you friend 😊

[Pete]

mother nature is certainly a master artist. very deep and thought-provoking words as good art should be. Well said and much enjoyed.

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[Thomas W Case]

Powerful imagery. Great work.

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊