Heaven

I perceive

Alone I sit
On the top of mountain mist
Touching the cloud's
Feeling the wind.

Eagle glides down the mountain
World underneath are covered
Rainclouds with thunder showers
Moves like bundle of cotton.

Loneliness is heaven
Seeing the Sunrise far beyond horizon
Colorful, as artist paints
Seeing the Sunset far beyond horizon.

My eyes see the world, colorful
My ears hear the music of nature
My skin touches the world beyond
Am I sitting in the heaven lonely to feel loneliness.​

Reviews

[Marie]

You have captured a trek with Mother Nature so eloquently in this beautiful poem, dear T. P... The pictures you paint are superb. Aloneness is heaven for me also. I love being on my own as I walk in the wood. Sunrise and Sunset are the two most beautiful events in any one day and their other wordly beauty refreshes our spirit. It really is a privilege to experience Mother Nature as an artist, she truly is the artist supreme. Very few people are as tuned into the world, the music of nature, the touch of the world beyond as you are, dear poet and it is so finely reflected in your wonderful poetry. I so enjoyed reading on this beautiful Autumn afternoon in Ireland and I thank you for sharing, dear T. P...

[Arundass TP]

Sure. I love to be alone with mother nature's music and colors. Our real mother. Thank you friend 😊

[Marie]

Most welcome always, dear poet 😊

[tumi]

such strong imagery depicted in your poem
very interesting

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[red93]

Very interesting ATP, and I like how you have put the different elements of this Poem together. Excellent ✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[berenongur]

A few months ago, as a form of belief, I convinced myself that this life we ​​live is a heaven of another life and bad things won't happen in heaven. And I realized that it's really better without people, heaven is something real without people. "Loneliness is heaven" This part and the last part really made me rethink. People often pollute even heaven, don't they? thank you thats an amazing poem

[Ken Simm.]

A very visual, righteous poem. I love it.

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[Chris Shaw]

Sitting on top of the world. How the senses must be stimulated. So visual. I wanted to be there to reach out and touch a cloud. Lovely work Arundass.

Chris

[Arundass TP]

Sure. It's an heavenly experience. Thank you friend 😊

[Lydia Shutter]

I remember trying to "touch the clouds" when I was young. A beautiful nature write. There is serenity in nature. Such beauty. Lydi**

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[Alesha]

This is a beautiful poem. I feel close to heaven when I’m surrounded by nature.

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[RC the author]

You have inspired me to post some of my poems on here also, i enjoy your work. Keep writing the good write.

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[Soren]

With nature one is never lonely maybe lonely to share it with someone else. A lovely write of her beauty and poetically worded as well

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊