Aliens are here...!

Head is there on my neck
It's aching, head is down
What's wrong, with my head
Head's calling I'm not well.

Waterfall through nose
Like Niagra or some other
Nose is there, What's wrong
Nose is calling I'm not well.

Shivering body, Shivering
I am under fire, burning
Like log of wood
Crawled under pillow.

I heard about Rhinoceros
Rhinoviruses invading all over my body
Intense war inside, smoke, dust and fire
Eating Rhino, killing and swallowing.

I'm not single
I am plenty, fragments
My body is alien world
Where millions of species live.

Reviews

[Essie W]

Very nice poem, it took a couple of reads for me to figure out what was going on, but that reflects on my reading comprehension more than anything else. I especially like the last section where everything is pulled together, "I am plenty" is a great line.

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[GlendaK]

Hi Arundass, awesome bit here about aliens!

Yeah, it seems that they are trying to kill us because they ARE!

Glad you're feeling better.

[Arundass TP]

Ok friend, Thank you for encouraging review.

[Vol]

Arundass,
I have been fortunate in my life and never had many infections or virus', but those few times were just as you describe... they change time and existence from everything there is a pinpoint of discomfort that is us, abed.
Vol

[Arundass TP]

Sure, fever is depressing. Thank you friend 😊

[Marie]

Sounds as though you have caught the flu virus that is presently doing the rounds in Ireland, T. P...
Best to do a test to see if you have caught Covid! Keep warm, take paracetamol to keep your temperature down, drink a lot of liquids to keep hydrated and light food until you are well again. Hope you will soon be feeling very much better, dear friend...

[Arundass TP]

Yes. Paracetamol is given additionally to combat war against those aliens to white blood cells. They are happy now. I feel it by sweating. Thank you friend.

[Marie]

So pleased that you are feeling a little better now, dear T. P... Keep safe and well, dear friend...

[Arundass TP]

Ok. Thank you, friend 😊

[jacob erin-cilberto]

I have felt this way often enough to relate to this poem...

some of the aches and pains seem to be happening like an out of body experience, and out of this world as well.
j.

[Arundass TP]

Sure. Thank you friend 😊

[Soren]

I too am parts of all things. Made of atoms of all the past and what I eat. I breath them in with every breath. What seems insane is the most sane thought.

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[Mauricio Montoya]

Wow, bro that's some heavy, L S D, in this write love the imagery and the ending keeps it alive. Thank you for sharing.

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[Mauricio Montoya]

Hey right now I'm here in Berkeley Ca,lol good write.

[Arundass TP]

Welcome friend 😊 Have a nice and beautiful day.

[Davidgeo]

You need to smoke some marijuana my friend

[Arundass TP]

Sure... Thank you friend 😊