Aliens are here...!

Head is there on my neck
It's aching, head is down
What's wrong, with my head
Head's calling I'm not well.

Waterfall through nose
Like Niagra or some other
Nose is there, What's wrong
Nose is calling I'm not well.

Shivering body, Shivering
I am under fire, burning
Like log of wood
Crawled under pillow.

I heard about Rhinoceros
Rhinoviruses invading all over my body
Intense war inside, smoke, dust and fire
Eating Rhino, killing and swallowing.

I'm not single
I am plenty, fragments
My body is alien world
Where millions of species live.

Reviews

[Essie W]

Very nice poem, it took a couple of reads for me to figure out what was going on, but that reflects on my reading comprehension more than anything else. I especially like the last section where everything is pulled together, "I am plenty" is a great line.

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[Ken Simm.]

I can so much empathise with this superb write. Excellent work.

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[Chris Shaw]

Keep fighting the bacteria Arundass and feel better soon. Love your second stanza description of waterfalls. Know that feeling well:)

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[Chris Shaw]

You are welcome.

[Sami Khalil]

Viruses can ravage our lives and bodies; Corona was one of those. Those minute creatures can cause more harm than the large ones in Nature.
We keep on fighting them as humans epic battles.

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome Arundas with the alien invasion too.

[Ern M. Yoshimoto]

this vividly captures being under the weather. i often feel hazy and feverish when i catch the flu. things become surreal and my logic leaves me. a virus not only causes discomfort to the body, it can also rob you of reason. i pray to never be sick again! how i hate it...

[Arundass TP]

Sure. Healthy lifestyle= Healthy living. Thank you friend 😊

[The Unknown Sith]

This is very good! I like the way you describe being sick and how you tied it up at the end.

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[Relic]

I've been lucky enough not to have gotten sick in a long time. I do remember the last time though and I can relate. You describe well enough to anyone who's never had these symptoms what one goes through. Good one, Arundass.

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[Thomas W Case]

Powerful. You bring this to life.

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[Jerry Ables]

Excellent and intense words, Arundass. I enjoyed the read very much. Richest blessings to you and yours! :)

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[Jerry Ables]

You're very welcome! :)