Another World Within

It's different

Word's are bird's
Flew away beyond horizon
Never return's even for a moment
World seem's strange.

Forgotten the door
How can I walk
Walking is something
That never understood.

Who are you?
Familiar!
As a blooming lilly
But, never I recall.

Sunrise' seems thorny
Sunsets are gloomy
Thoughts are sailing far away
Disappearing into darkness.

Where is my mouth?
Swallow! What it is?
Foods are poisons
To kill this innocent.

Sitting calm in one's own world
Cloths are burden
Thrown it far away, tearing
Sat looking heaven and hell! VANISHED!





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Reviews

[John the Baptist]

I must agree. This one is definitely different. The speaker seems to be one dealing with a world of unreality. There seems to be a touch of paranoia regarding food. Then there is that strange last verse. We may be witnessing the thought processes of a schizophrenic person here.

[Arundass TP]

Sure. Poem can point to Dementia also. Thank you friend 😊

[Marie]

This is a very poignant write of a much loved person who lives in their own little world as one does when they have Dementia or Alzheimer's. You have captured superbly all of the symptoms, T. P...
Usually, because the person with the disease is very happy because they have forgotten the world they lived in and live in their own little bubble, content and happy, but the person in the poem seems agitated, restless and very unhappy, a little paranoid too.
It is saddest of all for their family who love them to watch them change from their beloved Mom or Dad into strangers they do not know. I've been there with both my parents, bless them. I never want to have to go through it again!
Superbly penned poem! Thank you for sharing, T. P...

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend, you touched the truth of my poem. Have a nice day

[Marie]

Thank you, T. P... Wishing you a very blessed, joyful and wonderful day too....

[Coyote Poetry]

I did like the poetry my friend. You twisted the reader into your words and your views. Hard to know what we see and hear, is true or not. A very entertaining poem. You made the reader ponder and think.
Coyote

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome my friend.

[berenongur]

i just loved it. sweet, warm, and well written. have an amazing day

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[GlendaK]

VANISHED! In all caps. Is it The Rapture? Yes, all is waxing worse. Beautiful poetry.

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[red93]

Really interesting ATP how you weave the different threads in this piece into a coherent whole. Excellent ✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[schlanks]

I was hooked reading this. It's so exciting. I just wanted to see where the next stanza was going to take me. I always enjoy these glimpses into your imagination.

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[Mauricio Montoya]

My chosen spirit is the Eagle your words make that point but as I read it what's inside, very colorful, thank you for sharing.

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[Soren]

Many beautiful thoughts expressed in the stanzas of this poem Wisdom imparted in an enigmatic manner it speaks like the Tao in almost riddle form. Lovely

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[Sami Khalil]

Good questions to be answered by the poet; we all have our own experiences and beliefs.

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend ☺️

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome friend