She

It's natural.

Her eye's twinkled like a star
Her smile took me to the heaven
Her touch feels hot enough
Her presence, tied myself to her.

She daily gave me RED roses
She daily gave me what I want
She was telepathic
She was my world.

She always sings in melodious voice
She gave me tasty food.
She cares me like an infant
She was my goddess.

She was broken once
She was mute
She never walked
She was stand still.

She need a repair
She is my Artificial wife
She cannot be thrown away
She is repaired.

She was acting drunk
She is cruel always
She gave me WHITE roses
She was not my world now.

Her eyes are reddish
Her smile took me to hell
Her touch feels painful
Her presence fears me.​

Reviews

[Marie]

Oh - Oh! AI gone wrong!!! Artificial Intelligence and how wonderful she was until all went wrong with her circuits and she needed to be repaired, not discarded or thrown away, just repaired until she was like new again. You have captured this robot superbly, T. P... Her human qualities until she short-circuited were truly human and you penned this extremely well. Excellent depiction too! Amazing write! Thank you for sharing, dear poet...

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[Marie]

Always most welcome, T. P...

[Simone Davis]

I love this like a different reality, I feel like there are mixed emotions, like something we want so perfect but in reality we are all broken.

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[Soren]

Love goes in all directions sometimes good sometimes bad the direction that it seems heading in this poem is not the desired one very nicely written

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[berenongur]

The metaphor in the colors of the roses was enough to break my heart. Love should never be scary. I wish you to receive red roses that will make you feel safe.

[Arundass TP]

Sure. Thank you friend 😊

[red93]

Very interesting ATP how you juxtapose these conflicting views and make a coherent whole. Excellent ✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊