I want to Kiss her

and I want to

She is cute
Sparkling colors
Eyes are bluish
Sent from heaven.

Her shadows are dark
Mysterious than mystery
Like a cocktail
My heart is pounding.

She is beauty than the beautiful
Her voice is calm and melodious
She catwalks
She is my soul.

I want to hug tightly
Onto my chest until I die
She has a sweet smell
She is my beloved cat.

Reviews

[Marie]

I love this beautifully penned poem, dear T. P... It leads the reader astray! The truth is eventually revealed at the end of the poem but only in the very final line. Until that point is is very poetically hidden and I LOVE it! Such love and adoration for a cat is so well deserved. They are mysterious and magical and absolutely wonderful as you have so poetically said in this fabulous poem. WONDERFUL poem! Hope you write more like this one! Lovely work, T. P... and thank you for sharing...

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend. Your review is always encouraging to me.

[Marie]

Most welcome always, T. P...

[Abhilash Hegde]

very cute poem. reading it felt nice and a happy feeling. You have done so well to capture your love for your beloved cat in this write. Thank you for sharing.

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[Neville]

Although more of a dog man myself I can appreciate the feelings you have for your beloved cat .. and all wrapped up in such a delightful poem .. Nice one .. Neville

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[Samuel Dickens]

The ending made me smile. You can bet a cat will never make demands that you can't fulfill.

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[Tumi]

Soich.love and beauty out in place in your words
A very good writing

[Arundass TP]

Ji Thank you friend 😊

[Betty Hermelee]

Wow! All along I thought you were referring to a person; pretty shocked that at the ending it was a cat; some can be very mysterious and have sparkling eyes!
Nice write!
Warmly
B🌷

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[Betty Hermelee]

You’re very welcome frien
Warmly, B

[berenongur]

I was going to send it to my boyfriend asking if you wrote this poem for me, but I saw the last part hahah, it's still beautiful.

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[robert harris jr]

very nice poem very moving

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[jacob erin-cilberto]

What a surprise ending....Yes, mysterious they are...

I feel similarly about mine.

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[Soren]

A great write with a surprise ending that gives it charm and a fun read

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊