God

Who it is...

God sat besides me
Pointing distant blue star in heaven
Shining always, touching
Asking me to go there.

Colorful world of mysteries
Mysterious life's, blooming and vanishing
The world of colors, I have never seen.
Created for you and only for you.

You are my image, experience it
So, I can experience all  from here like a mirror
God is great, I felt
It was a cheat later, I felt.

Opens my eyes, opened my ears
I am in a body, too sensitive
Sat, crawling and walking
I saw the pain in seeing the colors.

Noises and music
Colorless and colorful
Formless and forms
Tasteless and tasteful

Good and bad
Ethical and unethical
Revenge and peaceful
Jealous and helpful

Accidents and miracle
Male and female
The ocean of love and hate
Brutality and Violence

Sympathy and Empathy
The difficulty of altruism
The great planet where god kicked me
Is full of fool's, fooled like me.

Living to die,
Living for love,
Living to praise him
Living to eat

Living for safety
Living multiplying
God laughs
Never cried

There is birth here
There is death here
Every where I see circle
God is a demon, the king of cruality
A cheat showing bluish color!!!?

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Reviews

[Brad Dehler]

Bold selection to name this poem "God". And right away you discuss it as God is right beside you. It brings a familiarity to all things above us, better than us, stronger than us. I like how you juxtaposed the meaning that seems to expand further and further upon examining what is actually happening in this poem. Good work Arundass.

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[Brad Dehler]

Honored to be your Featured Review

[LVW]

I don't know if you meant to do this but this almost feels like your personal answer to Ecclesiastes 3;1-11

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend for reading and review. I appreciate it

[apennylate]

Ey, dang good stuff.
Back and forth, tides ebb.
Light and dark fight for transition.

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[Marie]

I feel the need for so many opposites in this poem is for balance? For example : Happiness & Sadness, Life and Death etc, are all twins. My God is composed of energy as is the spirit within my body. I don't see God being human as most people do. I don't even call him God. I call it a Higher Source, because God is not human his or her does not apply, just as I am feminine in body in this lifetime, but my spirit within is neither female or male. A thought provoking write in this well inked poem, dear T. P... I enjoyed reading and thank you for sharing with me, dear friend...

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend for reading 🙂

[Marie]

Most welcome always, T. P...

[Neville]

I guess everyone has their own opinion on just about everything .. it is evident that this post is filled with poetic license .. and is overflowing with opposites which I believe enhances the principle of a unity of opposites and the inherent bonding and strength that so often exists .. a compelling read .. Neville

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊.