God

Who it is...

God sat besides me
Pointing distant blue star in heaven
Shining always, touching
Asking me to go there.

Colorful world of mysteries
Mysterious life's, blooming and vanishing
The world of colors, I have never seen.
Created for you and only for you.

You are my image, experience it
So, I can experience all  from here like a mirror
God is great, I felt
It was a cheat later, I felt.

Opens my eyes, opened my ears
I am in a body, too sensitive
Sat, crawling and walking
I saw the pain in seeing the colors.

Noises and music
Colorless and colorful
Formless and forms
Tasteless and tasteful

Good and bad
Ethical and unethical
Revenge and peaceful
Jealous and helpful

Accidents and miracle
Male and female
The ocean of love and hate
Brutality and Violence

Sympathy and Empathy
The difficulty of altruism
The great planet where god kicked me
Is full of fool's, fooled like me.

Living to die,
Living for love,
Living to praise him
Living to eat

Living for safety
Living multiplying
God laughs
Never cried

There is birth here
There is death here
Every where I see circle
God is a demon, the king of cruality
A cheat showing bluish color!!!?

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Reviews

[Brad Dehler]

Bold selection to name this poem "God". And right away you discuss it as God is right beside you. It brings a familiarity to all things above us, better than us, stronger than us. I like how you juxtaposed the meaning that seems to expand further and further upon examining what is actually happening in this poem. Good work Arundass.

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[Brad Dehler]

Honored to be your Featured Review

[Abhilash Hegde]

Thought provoking write. It's a heavy subject God. and it's hard to define. For me, I see it as a supreme force or energy. Birth and death is a cycle and until we are in this body, we are one day going to die and be one with elements again. Thanks for sharing, TP.

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[Mauricio Montoya]

Good write, it does make me think and wonder, thank you for sharing and God bless.

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[Maclawrence Famuyiwa]

A well crafted poem to reverence God, our creator. Well done!

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[Robert Trakofler]

when I died, I met this person of whom remained nameless... to me she appeared as a librarian perusing what seemed like infinite stacks of shelves filled with all of the annals of the many pages of life bound in the memories of many a heart. This happened to me both times I passed and the love I felt still resounds in me to this day

[Arundass TP]

Great . Thank you for informative review. Thank you friend 😊

[Pete]

the world is sick and we all live in it whether we are good or bad. it didn't start out that way. love and freewill are powerful, complex things - a gift to each of us from the creator of all. you pose a question that has been asked since the fall of man - why doesn't god stop evil and injustice? the only answer i have is faith, understanding and patience. all in due time according to his timetable. deep, thought-provoking, well written and much enjoyed. nice work.

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[Coyote Poetry]

I have seen terrible things and today there is terrible things going on. Damn wars, damn hate and I wonder. Where is God? Powerful words my friend. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry. I did like.
Coyote

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[Soren]

Opposites paired and God is no exception and it depends on the perspective as to what is good or bad or even if either exist. A most interesting read

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[emmajoygreen]

The meaning of God spreads the globe and back again. Perhaps the word is a war between emotions, belief and - trust in one's own belief. You have offered a gently worded discussion, argument and such, in order to have the reader think from one side of the moon and back. Acceptance is fine as long considered one's own truth/opinion is believed wholly and sincerely. Perhaps? I believe mine is. God is a beautiful mystery.

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[sienna]

They way you wrote this poem is how I speak in my head when I talk to God, or when I found him, I really enjoyed reading this!

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊