Suicide, Let me leave this world

And come back

I don't want to die now!
I must attempt suicide now
Blessed by gods and demons
curious to watch.

Million ways to suicide
Puzzling to choose right way
Demon's tell that way
God's shows another way.

Anyway I have to come back
Seeing the after world
Seeing the reality in dreams or not
Life is mysterious.

God's and demon's touched my soul
Better leave the body here
We sit beside until you are back
Else we throw your body into fire.

I am alone, while sitting alone
I still walk alone in the crowd
I am alone while praying to lord
Loneliness is truth, Loneliness is reality.

Great god's and demon's
Laughed a while
Better jump into fire
As we don't want to waste time.​

Reviews

[Marie]

Everybody who considers suicide is torn between staying and leaving. That is a true fact. Sometimes life can rob us of the hope of a better tomorrow, but we never know what is around the corner of the next day which may fill us with hope that our luck is turning, that we are heading in the right direction and that life will be better from this moment in time. Hope has arrived back and suicide is no longer an option. Living a new live, a new start, a new beginning is often all we need to live a long and fulfilled life. The many thoughts which swirl around in the mind of someone contemplating suicide is very finely penned in this poem. Never allow the demons to win, dear poet! Thank you for sharing...

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[Marie]

Most welcome always, T. P...

[Thomas W Case]

Powerful and poignant work.

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[robert harris jr]

great writting beautiful original style

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[Coyote Poetry]

I lost two brothers to suicide. I study suicide and my grandmother told me one. Never allow anyone to make you seek death. It would mean if you committed suicide. They won. Live and make their life hell-bounded. Great poetry. Open the door to a long conversation. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry my friend.
Coyote

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[Betty Hermelee]

I think that we should not fear God's wrath about leaving your body and committing suicide.... many of us think about it...but it's such a finality that one must be down in the dumps to really execute it....not that people haven't tried...and missed....and you have managed to come back...seeing the afterlife....
suicide is a very personal thing and should not be looked upon with judgement....
Nice write!
Warmly, B

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[Betty Hermelee]

You’re very welcome friend 🌷
Warmly
B.

[berenongur]

million ways to live and laugh, better laugh and live the life as we don't want to waste the time. beside that, amazing writing. you are gonna be alright, we are gonna be better together. what a beautiful thing you write poems for this world

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend

[Soren]

There are time that none of us want to be here. The final solution may be too final and affects too many. Don't make it a selfish choice.

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[Tumi]

the influence of God should prevail rather than the demos
either in a trance, dream or reality
well narrated poem, beautifully composed

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Must not let the demons win....

[Arundass TP]

Thànk you friend 😊

[JohnThomIV]

I love how the speaker of this poem is torn between whether to leave or not with the influence of God and Demons.

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊