Rainy days

are happiest days

Let me sing a song from heart
In a dancing floor with full of dancers
With violent turns and violent twists
With touching steps faster and swifter.

So let it rain in the mid of night
In the mid of day, with lightning
Soaking heart, in flash floods live
Jumping beats, Jumping high.

Rolling bodies nude and pristine
Heavenly touch, the heart of tears
Shiny eyes, opens the door
Rainy days are happier days

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Reviews

[Betty Hermelee]

Rainy days can be happier days if you make them so; dancing and twisting and jiving “ soaking heart, in flash floods live”……there is something enlightening about the rain…it gives you a vibe…for dancing and perhaps some sensual trysting as well….lovely
Warmly, B

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[Betty Hermelee]

You're very welcome TP
Warmly, B

[red93]

I like it when it rains heavily at night, and I am lying in bed and thinking Thank The Good Lord I am not out in that. Excellent Work ✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[Neville]

I have danced in the rain many times .. and it sure beats dancing on the dance floor .. Neville

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend ☺️

[Neville]

.......... You are most welcome .. Neville

[Abhilash Hegde]

I like the imagery here. I love rains too and totally agree Rainy days are happier days. Nothing like, when it rains and everything around comes alive, it's like a festival of happiness when everything in nature is getting a dip :) Thanks for sharing.

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[Abhilash Hegde]

you're very welcome, warm wishes friend.

[Pete]

a contemplative write. i think we were meant to be one with nature. innocent rainy days make us stop, look and listen taking stock of life. well said, good flow and enjoyed.

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[robert harris jr]

great writting thanks for the love

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[Mariej]

I love the rain, the feeling, scent and touch of it on my face and your poem brings out the great joy that is to be experienced by immersing oneself to the full in enjoying a beautiful rainy day. Well expressed, you paint the picture of a rainy day very artistically. Thank you for sharing, T. P... Lovely work!

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[Mariej]

Welcome always, T. P...

[John the Baptist]

If you've got roiling nude bodies inside, who cares about the weather?

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊. Ha . Sure.

[Chris]

The exuberance within the wording comes through and plays out behind my eyes... this left a smile behind.

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[Marie]

Rainy days are a blessing in disguise and you portray that in both word and imagery in this very finely penned poem, T. P. I enjoyed reading and thank you for sharing it. Lovely work, dear poet...

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[Marie]

Most welcome always, T. P...