Love

It's reincarnated

Tears fallen from my eyes
flowed as a river
Touching her heart
Opening the door of past.

Tears flowed out of her eyes
Flowed as a river
Touching my heart
Piercing the soul in pain.

Thousands of years in expectation
Eyes floated all over the world
She is living, I am living
For the love beyond the limits.

Thousands of life we took
Thousands of art we drawn
Together we sat, holding one another
Looking the heavens and hell beyond souls.

Reviews

[Mystical Ink]

Your poem beautifully expresses the deep emotional connection between two souls enduring through time and hardship. The imagery of tears flowing like rivers and hearts touching each other encapsulates the profound bond between you and your beloved. It evokes a sense of timeless longing and resilience, culminating in a shared journey of love that transcends earthly boundaries.

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[Samuel Dickens]

I think I get the gist of what you're saying, and it provokes deep thoughts. Although I'm a Christian, I will not deny the validity of other religions and beliefs. If there's one thing I've learned in these 76 years, it's that I don't know everything, nor does anyone else. The notion that we live many lives, love many loves, commit many crimes, etcetera, is highly worthy of consideration.

[Arundass TP]

Sure. Thank you friend

[Chris]

Love binds, especially when shared.

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend

[Ken Simm.]

This is a hymn. A Vedic hymn from the Veda of verses. Superb.

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[Davidgeo]

Do all Indians feel that American veterans should commit suicide? Divya/doodley tell me frequently that is the sentiment over there. Is that true? Should I be wary about traveling to your country? I'm a veteran and I would like to visit India but, if the sentiment is that people like me aren't really people, well, I should probably avoid the region right?

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend for nice review

[Stella Armour]

The soul lives on if not the body and the love it holds is eternal..

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[John Sullivan]

Love love love this piece.

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[Thomas W Case]

Powerful work. You paint vivid strokes with this one.

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 🙂

[tumi]

Tears flowed out of her eyes
Flowed as a river
Touching my heart
Piercing the soul in pain.
those were some touching lines
great poem to write

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend ☺️

[D]

Thousands of years in expectation
Eyes floated all over the world
She is living, I am living
For the love beyond the limits.

~ I loved these lines, dear Arun. They speak of lasting love in refreshingly different imagery.

[Arundass TP]

Thànk you friend 😊