and you married a man with round face

That's your wish

and you marry a man with round face,
large eyes, stuffed nose with perfect moustache
with lovable lips and attractive chin.

Unlock each and  every treasures
Show him the wealth of secrecy
In the mid of night, show him the moon
Where cool breeze touches the soul.

and show him the alien world
of humour and ecstasy
and the sunrise and sunset
The trees where apples grows red and reddish

and you show him the path you walked
ran, jumped and played
photograph s of forefathers and rankings
and sleep calmly hugging him nude in the bed ..of wonderworld.

I didn't throw you inside garbage can
I didn't throw you inside recycle bin
I didn't throw you somewhere alineiting
Only I loved your lovable wishes through out.
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Reviews

[emmajoygreen]

Loving words put with care telling tales, telling truths, telling how love can be - or not. You have gauged perhaps one example when the first short time was magical, mystical and unlike no other. Unique for the sharing of.. .. Then the lights goes on, the tide stops and thought takes over - what if? Why? How?

You continue with an almost grateful 'tone', forethought been ignored but - why miss adventure and adoration walking a path to

's.. .. .. the alien world
of humour and ecstasy
and the sunrise and sunset
The trees where apples grows red and reddish

and you show him the path you walked
ran, jumped and played
photograph s of forefathers and rankings
and sleep calmly hugging him nude in the bed ..of wonderworld.'

A truly finely lay of love and its moody siblings, showing how you should, would.. and lyrically did.

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[Tom]

Both two lovers here meet and immediately fall for eachother, their desires for eachother both physical and deeply emotional, a connection that bonds both hearts truly unighted unbridled passion..

Supberb imagery and emotional descriptions in a fine, flowing poem, kudos Sir!

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[Betty Hermelee]

Show him the ethereal world of secrets from the cosmos, show him the real world of dawns and sunsets, trees and grass and the fruits of nature; show him your roots, your heritage, show him your selfless love
Nice write!
Warmly
B

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[Betty Hermelee]

You’re very welcome TP
Warmly, B

[Soren]

Face, nor skin, nor culture can deter love. It is born blind and responds to touch. A wonderful poem of acceptance and giving. Very nice

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[Marie]

Two people from two very different paths in life meet and fall in love. One understands the others way of life but I feel one person is covert in the relationship and it brings a very difficult result for both and a big decision to be made. You narrate the story of such a relationship superbly, dear A.P. The sadness, the difficulties in n the relationship are all palpable throughout the poem due to your excellent choice of words which paint a heartbreaking picture for your reader. Excellent inking! Thank you for sharing, A.P. I enjoyed reading very much...

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[Marie]

Most welcome, dear friend. Beautiful and brightest blessings your way, A.P...

[AYVID N]

This is such an interesting poem, dear Arun. So much heartbreak felt and in such an unusual story. Loved and enjoyed this read, so much.

[Arundass TP]

Thank you Divya. Have a nice day