and you married a man with round face

That's your wish

and you marry a man with round face,
large eyes, stuffed nose with perfect moustache
with lovable lips and attractive chin.

Unlock each and  every treasures
Show him the wealth of secrecy
In the mid of night, show him the moon
Where cool breeze touches the soul.

and show him the alien world
of humour and ecstasy
and the sunrise and sunset
The trees where apples grows red and reddish

and you show him the path you walked
ran, jumped and played
photograph s of forefathers and rankings
and sleep calmly hugging him nude in the bed ..of wonderworld.

I didn't throw you inside garbage can
I didn't throw you inside recycle bin
I didn't throw you somewhere alineiting
Only I loved your lovable wishes through out.
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Reviews

[emmajoygreen]

Loving words put with care telling tales, telling truths, telling how love can be - or not. You have gauged perhaps one example when the first short time was magical, mystical and unlike no other. Unique for the sharing of.. .. Then the lights goes on, the tide stops and thought takes over - what if? Why? How?

You continue with an almost grateful 'tone', forethought been ignored but - why miss adventure and adoration walking a path to

's.. .. .. the alien world
of humour and ecstasy
and the sunrise and sunset
The trees where apples grows red and reddish

and you show him the path you walked
ran, jumped and played
photograph s of forefathers and rankings
and sleep calmly hugging him nude in the bed ..of wonderworld.'

A truly finely lay of love and its moody siblings, showing how you should, would.. and lyrically did.

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[Beccy]

Some marriages are made in heaven, some are not. But each and every union needs understanding, compassion and tolerance; only then do wishes become reality.

This is a love poem with a difference.

Beccy.

[Philip Gaber]

There's a musical and rhythmic quality to your words. Very good. It is pleasant to read.

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 🙂

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You accept everything of the one you marry, flaws and all. Nobody is perfect. If both reveal the truth in their hearts and share it with each other, then both will be taken to places of wonder. Discarding one for another is not the right solution. Struggle allows both to grow and overcome adversity.

I enjoyed the poem.

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[Ken e Bujold]

Love, thistles and thorns, the sweetest scent of all aromas. Whether she stays forever or only momentarily, we never forget do we?

Lovely poem A

Ken

[Arundass TP]

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[Neville]

I think this is outstanding my friend .. Bravo .. Neville

[Arundass TP]

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[Neville]

....................... 😊👍

[Poetic_Vixen]

Impressive work on the portrayal of the poem, the is sweet love in the beginning lines wrapping up achingly through the ending lines, effectively written. Glad to read this.

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[Thomas W Case]

Beautiful. It's like a microcosm of a difficult love. Strong words.

[Arundass TP]

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[Chris Shaw]

That last stanza really took a turn. There are difficulties in this relationship which need to be ironed out. I felt sadness here. You convey that sadness so well.

Chris

[Arundass TP]

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[Alira]

Beautiful and gentle. I have one question though, why “reddish” for the other apples? Though that confused me a bit, I found the imagery in this poem to very tender and pleasant and heartwarming. Great work.

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊