The heaven inside hell

The wish of God

Thousands of them
Lie on bed, experimenting
The existence of heaven
Inside the hell sweating!

Thousands of them
Looks to the sky and above
Searching heavens and it's existence
Outside the hell.

Thousands of them
Close their eyes assuming
The existence of heaven
In the mind, of hell infinite.

Thousands of them
Never ever waste their time
Assuming and thinking
About existence of heaven.

God is clever, insightful,
Knowing the weakness of foolish soul's
Nailing the concept, theories
The heaven inside the hell.

Reviews

[Neville]

Although I take a different path from a spiritual perspective .. I do respect the values and beliefs upheld and taught within and by all faiths .. I would much like to believe in a heaven and hell but chose to reserve judgement until my own moment of enlightenment .. A compelling read regardless and throughout .. Neville

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend

[Kim S.]

Very intriguing write here, makes me think of a lot of different things.
Enjoyed the reading this.

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[Stu. T.H.]

What a treat, is it not? From the Bible, one recalls the utmost painful punishment in Hell was to be shunned from Heaven for eternity. Even outside of the Biblical context, the poem can be reflected as a life lesson for wrongdoers in the world to understand the depravity of their indecency and crimes. For one to evade the punishments from the laws could be hard and difficult, but there has never been one to evade the punishments of their conscience after death, when their crimes are eternally perceived and judged amongst the stars, marking their simple existence forever in the world as a sinner and no more. How harsh, but befitting. Thank you for sharing your work, author Arundass TP, may the message you have imbedded within your work be recognised.
- Leon

[Arundass TP]

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[Betty Hermelee]

This seems very ethereal to me…contemplating heaven or hell or both, but I magibe ( in theory) that one could be in hell contemplating how to get out of hell into heaven…. I guess only God’s wisdom could conceive of this…but many of us ( not me) contemplate heaven and don’t even think about hell….i hope this isn’t babble but I’m not a believer so I’m doing my best!
Warmly, B

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[Betty Hermelee]

You’re very welcome!
Warmly, B

[carl]

Quite a lot of variations here presented for both heaven and hell, perhaps alluding to the many different ways that man contemplates and puts into perspective realities that are currently, only concepts. " It would be heaven if....." or " I'm going through hell because..." Thought the read was very engaging, well spaced and flows well from one stanza to the next. Made me respond with thinking...."Subtle is the Lord, but malicious he is not". - A. Einstein - thanks for the post glad I came by -carl

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend ☺️

[Fabian G. Franklin]

"There is no fear in love, but perfect love drives out fear, because fear involves punishment, and the one who fears is not perfected in love." 1 John 4:18 We overcome doubt by faith and we overcome fear by love and all the while it is hope that fills our sails and carries us homeward. There abide these three; faith, hope and love. But the greatest of these is love. But certainly mankind is much involved in creating his own versions of heaven and hell. I think often our species has been quite confused in its choosing. I enjoyed the read. F.

[Arundass TP]

Sure. What may be the precise truth? I was thinking! Thank you friend for a good review.

[Thomas W Case]

Powerful work. You paint the mood well.

[Arundass TP]

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[jacob erin-cilberto]

I have always felt that hell is on earth...we experience it and then sooner or later maybe we find out what heaven is like...I wish we could experience more of that on earth.
j.

[Arundass TP]

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[1809 Black Plague Decem..]

Arudass TP,
this is a great one!
It's hard to talk about what we think,
because it is heresy in the eyes of others.
But it isn't child, it is just conflict,
the questioning of one's steps, decision, why
GREAT WRITE
mjk

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[1809 Black Plague December]

you are most welcome, Dearest