Fate

Fate

A Poem by Arundass TP
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Always repeats

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Atlast, atlast
i found a hopper jumping around
turning around, around and around, spinning,
leaping fast and faster
happily, satisfactorily
from one plant to another.

Atlast, Atlast
I found a frog observing
sharply, curiously, concentrating
sitting calm, meditative
beneath a plant calmly..

Atlast, Atlast
I found frog catching the hopper
swallowing, happily, satisfactorily
sitting calm, closing its eyes
In my garden calm and beautiful.

© 2024 Arundass TP


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There is so much to see if you take time out in the natural world. Nature isn’t always kind though. Your poem made me think of food chains. I love spending time in my garden. Your poem creates pictures in my mind. Nicely penned Arundass. Have a happy Sunday.

Chris

Posted 7 Months Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Arundass TP

7 Months Ago

Thank you friend 😊



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nicely written Arundas. I can feel this write.

Posted 7 Months Ago


Arundass TP

7 Months Ago

Thank you friend 😊
Pray and foe that's what I see when I read yes the garden is beautiful and clam but the frog will lap that hopper. Thank you for sharing.

Posted 7 Months Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Arundass TP

7 Months Ago

Thank you friend 😊
Such wonderful patterns of natural sights. They are very much the calling of nature fro those who are attentive enough to lend their senses to the calls. Observers, as we fortunately are, could be invited to their joint larks, such meticulous charms.
A great read in leisure, author Arundass TP. Thanks for sharing your work with me.
- Leon.

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Arundass TP

7 Months Ago

Thank you friend 😊
Nature has wonders to behold, some cruel, some beautiful but all, only varying perspectives on survival. The grasshopper's demise is the frog's survival. Perhaps if the grasshopper were not so busy he might notice the impending danger. Great read, my friend. F.

Posted 7 Months Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Arundass TP

7 Months Ago

Thank you friend 😊
cute....and much satisfaction from the alliteration ....Atlast Atlast.

Poor hopper.

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Arundass TP

7 Months Ago

Thank you friend 😊
There is so much to see if you take time out in the natural world. Nature isn’t always kind though. Your poem made me think of food chains. I love spending time in my garden. Your poem creates pictures in my mind. Nicely penned Arundass. Have a happy Sunday.

Chris

Posted 7 Months Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Arundass TP

7 Months Ago

Thank you friend 😊

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Added on April 7, 2024
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Arundass TP
Arundass TP

Thalassery, Kerala, India



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