Crush My Skull, PLEASE

Crush My Skull, PLEASE

A Poem by Arundass TP
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To see the ocean of mysteries

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I'm curious to open my skull
Where the vast ocean of mystery lies
Never floating, never moving
Inside my skull lies intact.

Help me cut my skull with an axe
Into two vast oceans
Where millions and million star shines
Inside my skull so intact.

Help me cut my skull with a gas cutter
To take out and see the whole cosmos
Of thoughts and images floating
Inside my skull so intact.

Help me cut my skull with a sword
To jump into vast ocean of darkness and light
Where the contrasts live so calmly
Inside my skull so intact.

Help me cut my skull into two
To see who I am, Where I am
When I came,  What I am
To see my existence, unknown!​

Crush my skull.... please....
Under Mammoth foot
To end all mysteries
Written down unfaithfully...

© 2024 Arundass TP


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This poem is quite violent in imagery. The words turned into brush strokes and I was given a painting which was very Picasso like. The brain is certainly a mystery and very powerful, but not something I particularly want to see. I find this poem intriguing in content Arundass.

Chris

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Arundass TP

7 Months Ago

Thank you friend 😊😊😊



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but if you crush your skull all the beautiful images will spill out and be lost ...

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Arundass TP

8 Months Ago

I think images are dreams. Thank you friend 😊
Stella Armour

8 Months Ago

maybe so my friend :)
To make sure the content of your skull remains intact during your search you might consider instead, slicing your head off at the neck, perhaps using a guillotine, or possibly you could engage a professional headchopper, either of which should, could, would enable you to look up into a thoroughly pristine, undamaged skull cavity, with you then, perhaps even using a microscopic probe for access to the more intricate and complex areas.
Afterwards, a competent seamstress could, should, might, apply a zipper Allowing you to easily zip the whole structure back together again, making future exploration all that much easier to accomplish.........))???
Just a thought.
Good luck.


Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Arundass TP

8 Months Ago

Thank you friend 😊 I was thinking....what is inside....
There has to be other ways to open the door to your mind for the skull is there to protect just as you have to find the way to a woman’s heart. Nice write.

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Arundass TP

8 Months Ago

Thank you friend.

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Added on March 16, 2024
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Arundass TP
Arundass TP

Thalassery, Kerala, India



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