The Eyes

Of dreams

Someone looks
Somewhere they sit
With Glowing eyes
The fire within burns.

Some have two
Some have three and some four
Some carries six and some eight
Hundreds or millions, billions or trillions.

Just glowing fire from within
Sees rainbow of trillions and infinite hues
Within infinite canvas spreading
Just to put colors of heaven infinite.

When the eyes are closed
A blanket of darkness was covered
Over the canvas, the colors are dreams
Never seen until you open the doors of heaven.​

Reviews

[Betty Hermelee]

When you close your eyes to the heavens, yes it is dark, but open them, and you'll see trillions of lights sprouting form stars, comets, the moon, and all that is in the heavens.... the cosmos is wildly imaginative....pure colors like a fine painting...the eyes see it all and they are enlightened by the universe....
Warmly, B

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[Betty Hermelee]

You're very welcome TP,
Warmly, B

[Marie]

A very creative write, finely penned with excellent depiction. Lovely work! Thank you for sharing, T. P...

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend

[Chris Shaw]

I always think I of the stars in the heavens, as eyes looking down on earth. A lovely creative write Arundass. Most enjoyed.

Chris

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊😊

[Linda alexander]

Great poem, metaphor justifies the intent.

[Arundass TP]

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[mou]

Infinity has magic! It gives the wings to our wildest imagination. I like how you play with the dimension while giving colors to the imagery.
- mou

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[andrew mitchell]

Eyes are like stars ,they twinkle and entice.

[Arundass TP]

Sure. Eyes are windows to see light. Thank you friend

[Mauricio Montoya]

Wow I could with many interpretations the eyes makes a woman but you're not that, as boxers you know where hit comes from, but that's not what this write means, it what we see, I enjoyed this read.thank you for sharing.

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[Mauricio Montoya]

You're welcome and have a blessed day my friend.

[Fabian G. Franklin]

The eyes have it. And the motion is carried. I enjoyed your "look" at the "windows of the soul".

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[Dave Brown]

Eyes are certainly a wonderful gift
Is their anything more fulfilling than lying back on a wide open grassy field, head in hands and looking up into a clear night sky to see the gazillions of stars above stretching from horizon to horizon

[Arundass TP]

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[Writergurl]

This is an amazing write here

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊