The world unknown

Known by mind

When I looked inside a well
I saw a face smiling
No body, No legs
Hanging on rope tightly.

When I looked second time
I saw the head climbing
No body, No legs
Climbing slowly with hands.

When I looked third time
I saw it talking aloud
NO body, No legs
Talking aloud with screeching sound.

When I looked fourth time
I saw face disappeared
No body, Nn legs, No head
Just hands climbing the rope

When I looked fifth time
I saw nothing coming
Behind there heard murmurs
Just wishes, wishes and wishes.

When I turned around
A nude lady talking without head
Did i jumped inside well
Did I opened my eyes early morning!​

Reviews

[Soren]

These haunting images provoke the mind asking the meaning of such imagery and metaphors and several appear. I see a mirror in the well. The face is the first window into a person's being, hands are what set us apart having opposable thumbs and then speech, but here just screeching. It is wishes the fill the human mind and drive us to action and invention, desire in the form of a nude woman comes after wishes, because she is headless does this mean women in general? I don't think you had to jump into the well. I think you were already in it and there was no need to open the eyes they were already open. Just my personal interpretation of a wonderful piece

[Arundass TP]

Thank you very much for interpretation of dream. I feel I am ok. Thank you friend 😊

[Ken e Bujold]

evocative. surreal descent into the human condition, disconnect between the two realities: aspiration and resignation. very intriguing read A

ken

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[Fabian G. Franklin]

This was a surreal read, much like a dream, disconnected thoughts from disconnected bodies. It was very interesting. I enjoyed the read.

[Arundass TP]

Your thoughts on my poem are welcome. Have a nice day 😊

[Neville]

I think I would be long gone before I took any more than the second look just to make sure I was dreaming .. I did enjoy yours though .. Neville

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[Stu. T.H.]

Intriguing dream as always, author Arundass TP, the madness stems from your mind and vividly paints the worlds in your works. And such madness is always welcomed in mysteries. Thank you for sharing your work, have a nice day.

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊. Have a nice day too.

[Dave Brown]

possibly someone thinking she talked too much, chopped off her head to shut her up, but even that didn't work!
she couldn't see without a head, she will quite likely fall down the well again and have to go through the whole thing again.
Poor girl, can't even enjoy a double glazed donut and a soft ice cream.

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[Ken Simm.]

Was this a dream or a trip. Whatever very surreal write.

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[FPW]

Sounds like a very strange dream you have endured. Nothing seems to make sense and many dreams are just like that. Must have been very glad to wake up from it.

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[Thomas W Case]

Wow. Very surreal. Powerful imagery.

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[John the Baptist]

Has the sound of a nightmare. I sincerely hope it isn't autobiographical.

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊