I am a perfect rabbit

Of all other rabbits

Rabbit burrows and dreams
In my back yard bushy
Burrows I dig was not perfect
Burrows I live is never perfect.

Leafs around are not perfect
Food I ate was not perfect
The path i jumps around was not perfect
Nature around seems not perfect.

Colors I need was not perfect
Future and past was never perfect
That rabbit was not perfect at all
Rabbits are totally imperfect.

Where can I see a perfect perfection
Perfection is what I need always
This world is not perfect
But I feel, I am a perfect rabbit of all rabbits.


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Reviews

[Betty Hermelee]

Great metaphors.....a human's world is not perfect, nor is a rabbit's world perfect.... in fact none of us is perfect. and that's what makes it most interesting... perfection is almost impossible to obtain in any sphere....we can only hope to accomplish our own best, but it will never be perfect, except perhaps in our eyes......it's a very personal notion...i like the way you repeated the word perfect over and over to show that it really is unattainable....but we can strive for it....i like being imperfect....
Warmly, B

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend. Have a nice day 😊

[Betty Hermelee]

You’re very welcome
Warmly, B

[Chris Shaw]

None of us are perfect. The beauty lies in our imperfections and we live in a most imperfect world. I do love bunnies though. They are cute and make a nice metaphor. Have a loveky day Arundass.

Chris

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊 Good night 🌉

[Thomas W Case]

Great use of metaphor and symbolism.

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊 Have a nice day.