I am a perfect rabbit

Of all other rabbits

Rabbit burrows and dreams
In my back yard bushy
Burrows I dig was not perfect
Burrows I live is never perfect.

Leafs around are not perfect
Food I ate was not perfect
The path i jumps around was not perfect
Nature around seems not perfect.

Colors I need was not perfect
Future and past was never perfect
That rabbit was not perfect at all
Rabbits are totally imperfect.

Where can I see a perfect perfection
Perfection is what I need always
This world is not perfect
But I feel, I am a perfect rabbit of all rabbits.


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Reviews

[Betty Hermelee]

Great metaphors.....a human's world is not perfect, nor is a rabbit's world perfect.... in fact none of us is perfect. and that's what makes it most interesting... perfection is almost impossible to obtain in any sphere....we can only hope to accomplish our own best, but it will never be perfect, except perhaps in our eyes......it's a very personal notion...i like the way you repeated the word perfect over and over to show that it really is unattainable....but we can strive for it....i like being imperfect....
Warmly, B

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend. Have a nice day 😊

[Betty Hermelee]

You’re very welcome
Warmly, B

[andrew mitchell]

A home for some is perfect with imperfections while to others it appears to be a mess. But who is to judge if they are happy.

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[Stella Armour]

i love rabbits and i used to keep them , none were perfect but what is the definition of perfect anyway ?
Like us they all have imperfections and different characters .. some are loveable some are downright nasty lol

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[FGFRANKLIN]

I love this. We can always only be what God has made us and what we make of ourselves but it is not necessarily dependent upon what others make of us. Reputation is what others think of us but good character and anything "good" in general is usually consistent while matters of taste vary greatly. My little daughter thinks all rabbits are perfect. She wants one for a pet. I keep telling her that free bunnies are happy bunnies and we should just enjoy seeing them out in the yard. Here's to the perfect happy rabbit content with his place and face...speaking of rabbit faces, I do admire that split lip they use like fingers to pull tufts of grass with and those strong hind legs that travel so quickly. Everything is measured by the gift and the gift is life.

[Arundass TP]

Sure, life is all about. Thank you friend 😊

[Neville]

I'm firmly with Betty .. in a world of imperfections .. I would rather be a perfect rabbit ..

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[Dave Brown]

great subjrct matter
perfection is an interesting cuncept and arabbit habbit!
All consudored , we are perfectliy impurfect
just as arr my typin skills

[Arundass TP]

Really.... Thank you friend 😊

[Stu. T.H.]

A perfect rabbit is a rabbit well-fed, only then it may find the world a bit closer to perfection when it is content. Thank you for sharing your work, author Arundass TP, it relates to the many whimsical thoughts I had when I was a tad younger, thank you, and I wish you a fine day.

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[living lavender]

the strive for perfection can cloud one's perspective.
this was a fun read. burrowing towards perfect :)
i love the final two line's: "This world is not perfect
But I feel, I am a perfect rabbit of all rabbits."
{this seems to be a life motto for many}

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[John the Baptist]

The rabbits I have seen didn't seem to fall into the realms of perfect or imperfect. They were just rabbits. But if you want to be a perfect rabbit, feel free to give it a shot.

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[Ken Simm.]

There is a sort of perfect beauty in being imperfect. And that is what this bunny is.

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊