Dear-MY Adorable Love

My dream

Somehow!
You are running beyond horizon
Leading life of your own!
I think, my memories are colorful.

Somehow!
You are living in my heart
Leading life as I think
I feel, My feelings are sensitive

Somehow!
I never saw you near me
Walking around wagging tail, sniiffing
I feel, My love is blooming

Somehow!
You never came, ever
You my Artic Fox
I feel, You are my adorable love.

Reviews

[Neville]

at first because of my poor eyes I thought you opened with 'Somehowl' which I guess may have been quite fitting .. nevertheless, upon my second reading I noticed my own error .. to be honest, I am quite taken by the way you have crafted this little beauty .. I would award more than the 100 marks if it was possible .. Bravo .. Neville

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[Neville]

You are most welcome 😎

[Betty Hermelee]

A clever metaphor for the longing you feel for someone you love that does not come to you as you desire…all in a dream….lovely
Warmly
B

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[Stella Armour]

The comparison to an Arctic fox is wonderful ... the longing is even more so .

Well done my friend :)

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[Snail Mails]

Your poem paints a vivid picture of memories, feelings, and this gentle, blooming love. It's both a bit sad and incredibly sweet. Great job on creating something that stirs the heart

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[Chris Shaw]

Beautiful poetry Arundass. Four short stanzas and yet you convey the emotion of love with so much warmth. Perfect.

Chris

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[Chris Shaw]

Last night I saw a fox walking down the road by my house. Quite alone in the darkness. A beautiful sight to see. We live very close to open countryside and farm fields.

[Arundass TP]

That will be a happy moment. They are beautiful animals we all miss these days. Here foxes are seen occassionally. Have a nice day friend 😊

[Stu. T.H.]

The Sweetening flavour of Love is Strong in this one. The construct of the poem feels freely composed with rhymes playfully dance around rather than sticking to a tight format. A lovely work, author Arundass TP. Thank you for sharing.

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[W. Barrett Munn]

You remind me of something Richard Hugo wrote that what ties the lines together is not logic but the poet who placed them there.

Winston

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊