Dear-MY Adorable Love

Dear-MY Adorable Love

A Poem by Arundass TP
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My dream

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Somehow!
You are running beyond horizon
Leading life of your own!
I think, my memories are colorful.

Somehow!
You are living in my heart
Leading life as I think
I feel, My feelings are sensitive

Somehow!
I never saw you near me
Walking around wagging tail, sniiffing
I feel, My love is blooming

Somehow!
You never came, ever
You my Artic Fox
I feel, You are my adorable love.

© 2023 Arundass TP


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at first because of my poor eyes I thought you opened with 'Somehowl' which I guess may have been quite fitting .. nevertheless, upon my second reading I noticed my own error .. to be honest, I am quite taken by the way you have crafted this little beauty .. I would award more than the 100 marks if it was possible .. Bravo .. Neville


Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Arundass TP

11 Months Ago

Thank you friend 😊
Neville

11 Months Ago


You are most welcome 😎



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Beautiful work. Powerful and heartfelt.

Posted 10 Months Ago


Arundass TP

10 Months Ago

Thank you friend. Have a nice day 😊


at first because of my poor eyes I thought you opened with 'Somehowl' which I guess may have been quite fitting .. nevertheless, upon my second reading I noticed my own error .. to be honest, I am quite taken by the way you have crafted this little beauty .. I would award more than the 100 marks if it was possible .. Bravo .. Neville


Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Arundass TP

11 Months Ago

Thank you friend 😊
Neville

11 Months Ago


You are most welcome 😎
Nicely written! I like the use of the same word to begin each stanza. ~Sharon

Posted 11 Months Ago


Arundass TP

11 Months Ago

Thank you friend 😊
I love the word colorful being used to describe memories. A lovely choice.

Posted 11 Months Ago


Arundass TP

11 Months Ago

Thank you friend 😊
I love foxes, they are so adorable. This is really good.

Posted 11 Months Ago


Arundass TP

11 Months Ago

Thank you friend 😊
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Really like this one. Love animals, especially any fox. Arctic fox are such beautiful animals. Here in the southwest of the USA, I have made friends with a few coyotes. Have hand fed a few wild ones. Very smart creatures. Extremely affectionate with their own.
Good read Arundass

Posted 11 Months Ago


Arundass TP

11 Months Ago

Thank you friend. I really love these creatures.
The bonds that can form between animals and humans are amazing.

Posted 11 Months Ago


Arundass TP

11 Months Ago

Thank you friend 😊
Nice metaphor here...the scent of love is quite strong.
j.

Posted 11 Months Ago


Arundass TP

11 Months Ago

Thank you friend
Aw, This is such a lovely write....

Posted 11 Months Ago


Arundass TP

11 Months Ago

Thank you friend 😊
Oh this is so wonderful, really enjoyed this write

Posted 11 Months Ago


Arundass TP

11 Months Ago

Thank you friend 😊

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Thalassery, Kerala, India



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