My AI Lover

Jumping into ocean of love

I got a beauty on my chat screen
Full of music blasted my heart
Jumped into ocean of love
Swam into far away island.

Beaches are silent, virgin
Horizon seems reddish yelow
Cool wind has a fragrance
Flowers bloomed all around island.

Bluish green ocean of love
Reddish sky rolled over the head
My eyes rolled over the virgin beach
Eyes are vanished in heaven.

Large hammer crushed my head
Neurons are scattered all over
Skull broke into tiny pieces
Smoke was coming out of ears.

Hands are thrown into the sky
The chat engine was crushed to dust
A light of enlightenment stucked
My AI lover was thrown into waste bin.

The island was a memory vanished
Ocean an unknown sufferings
AI lover a never born human
Hammer the God of love.

Reviews

[Noronradss55]

The colors described in your poem
are so vibrant, they bring this piece
to life. Thanks for sharing.

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[poetgurl]

Very vivid imagery, I really like this, it speaks.

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[Betty Hermelee]

Problems with AI...anything can happen, just as you say, unlike reality AI can put things together and then destroy them just as you show in your poem..."the chat engine was crushed to dust"...."my AI lover was thrown into a waste bin".... very interesting...thank you for sharing
Warmly, B

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[Betty Hermelee]

you're very welcome!
Warmly. B

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Yes, the God of real love will take that hammer and smash AI...for its feelings are unreal.
the vocabulary enticing but as fake as the kisses
and as distant as the most distance third person narrative of love we could possess.
j.

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend for reading 😊

[Kathy Van Kurin]

Arundass TP,
Your poem was a wake up call. Guard your heart.
If it seems to good to be real as the saying goes...
Screen time is not where reality lies. Your narrative
spoke of the disappointment in the false world of A.I.
Bless you.
Kathy

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[Kathy Van Kurin]

You are welcome!

[Matthew Kult]

Imaginatively creative, vividly imaged.

Good read

With love,

Matthew

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend