My fall, Someone's wish

I am history

From somewhere I am born
Floating through the heaven
Infinity calls from far corner
The future never ever ends my journey.

From somewhere I am shaped
On the way to unknown destiny
They tell, I have a tail, brighter enough
Watch from somewhere searching my path.

From somewhere to somewhere
The heaven's takes me to the glamourous side
But never thought glamour has an end
God's are just sadistic, pretending to be wise.

Some where I am fallen
Burning and transforming into dust and ashes
What I gave to life on any planet
It's death, death and death only

Dinausur"s know my strength, fearfully
But man only imagines, writing history
God's laugh aloud seeing my fall
Somewhere I must vanish, it's someone's wish.

Reviews

[Chris]

I remember writing of all the people wishing on a falling star...
and how sad it was that it was likely the burning heart of a love ignored falling from the heavens to the earth below.

Comets, asteroids, and other debris have rained upon planets since the beginnings. The fall IS bad! The sudden stop - well, the dinosaurs saw it - once.

[Arundass TP]

Thanks friend for reading 😊

[Betty Hermelee]

I wouldn't worry about God; if you believe in eternity, that's all that matters; at some point I believe we all shall die....you find your path and that's' all that matters; i felt a lot of emotion in this poem. From whence you came is important, and if you think there is an eternity then that's fine....keep searching and you will find your path.
Warmly, B

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend for reading 😊

[Betty Hermelee]

You’re very welcome!.
Warmly, B

[emmajoygreen]

There's strong touches of both emotion and science here. Whichever, you have used words with cues to thoughts and feelings from birth to whenever. Seems we all have our path in space, wherever that space is: beneath, around, above or all What we do with it, or what it does to us is an unknown. Your words nudge thought, even better: debate. But do we know we are laughed at by God or indeed, anyone else? Or is it self who laughs at Self?
(sorry re typos)

[Arundass TP]

Thanks for reading friend.

[Chris Shaw]

Wonderful imagery here of a comet. Mirrors human life. So many burn out before reaching their full potential. Great reading my friend.

Chris

[Arundass TP]

Thank you for reading friend.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

The fact is human life is supposed to have arrived on earth on a meteor. This poem raises some interesting points for discussion.

[Arundass TP]

Thank you my friend 😊

[jacob erin-cilberto]

I like the metaphor of the shooting star/ comet to one's life.
We either get to our destination in life or burn out trying to achieve it.
j.

[Arundass TP]

That's a fact. Thank you friend for reading 😊