When I opened my eyes

Mystery of mystery formed

When I opened my eyes
Before the time came to life
I started hearing the silence
I started seeing the first color.

The first sound came into life
Shaking the infinite, the vaccum
Blasting my inner core, creating unknown
Creating consciousness out of abyss.

Darkness was a spectrum of colors
Colliding, creating ripples to infinity
My hands are spreading, never ending
Mystery in mystery, like a fountain of dreams.

Bubbles are scattered, moving aimless
Some are bonded, some are repelled
Some are vanished, Some existed
Some swallowed some, and some other swallowed something.

Did I heard the first thunder sound?
The future is born somewhere there!
Did I heard the strong celestial sound
The past is formed out somewhere behind.

I felt the brilliance of display in colors
The music of creativity murmuring in silence
I never slept until then
I myself live a mystery of mystery.

Life generated somewhere, never I seen one
Never I know all existed, never I felt vanished
It's part of my soul, until I go to sleep again
It's not a dream, it's a blooming flower.

Reviews

[Alfi]

this is so amazing , good work.

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend for reading 😊

[DIVYA]

A poem mystical and one that connects the reader to themselves, takes them on their own journey, right to the time where it all began. You compel the reader to go deep within themselves and your words leave a lasting feeling. I loved this poem.

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend for reading 😊

[John the Baptist]

Has the sound of a spontaneous spiritual experience. Could also be something generated by the ingesting of a powerful hallucinogen like LSD. Most of the senses are involved and there is the feeling that all is one. These experiences can give the feeling of enlightenment when they are good, but can also be terribly frightening. Proceed with caution.

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend. I don't know these are lines written without thinking yesterday afternoon when I wrote a line the second line came. Before I thought of writing and started for dinausur. Anyway I wrote it. I don't know what is going inside. Thank you friend for reading and writing about caution.