Garden

Here garden is busy

Daisies and roses
Lillies and marigold
Cosmos and lavender
Lotus and others.

Blooms in my garden
With grasses and trees
Where birds flock together
Squirrel's and Hamsters on the move.

Ripened fruits spreads all-around
In a wooden basket grapes are of plenty
Bee's swarm around the basket.
To taste the sweetness of grapes.

Cow's, Goat's and pig's
Swans, C***s and hens
Cuckoos compose their music
For the next days sunrise.

Garden is a busy place
Where grass hoppers dances
Dung beetles role their love
On all season's around the year.

If someone knows the reality of himself
Where there is no garden around
He is a dead walking toy
In the graveyard he created.

Reviews

[nastasimir]

Dear Arundass
It was pleasant to read your poem.
Thanks for sharing
The garden seems like the Eden garden.
The message could be living naturally with creatures God created and living together in harmony with
nature. The sense of living on Earth.
This beautiful garden could be also a metaphor for the richness of the spiritual life and for understanding
of the World
Thank

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[Mauricio Montoya]

Such an abstract of many things that could come against itself yet live in harmony love how you brought this together, no pun intended, lol. Thank you for sharing.

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[Ken e Bujold]

sorry for delay Arundass, am on vacation so limited time.

from a technical standpoint, your cadence is superb. Theme is indeed one of a very busy garden, captured extremely well in all the bee-hive exuberance

enjoyed the read

ken

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

Vivid and bold imagery. The colors did glow in my mind as I read. It seemed to take on a life of it's own as it grew. It was so full of life that the last stanza hits like a ton of bricks. We know what it is like to suffer after being bathed in the light of this welcoming place.

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend for reading 😊

[Alla Antsis]

Love it! Garden starts in the hearts and minds.

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend for reading 😊

[Throwing Romeo]

At one with life....
"Taste the sweetness "
Thank you for sharing.

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend for reading 😊

[D. Mansfield]

I enjoy gardens, and I enjoyed your poem, thank you

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend for reading 😊

[Celie Rose]

The poem is well written and expressed beautifully. An idyllic place. I like this quote, "If someone knows the reality of himself Where there is no garden around He is a dead walking toy In the graveyard he created."

[Arundass TP]

Let's have a garden of thoughts. Thank you friend 😊

[Coyote Poetry]

I love my garden. My favorite are my wildflowers and my roses.
"Garden is a busy place
Where grass hoppers dances
Dung beetles role their love
On all season's around the year."
The above lines were my favorite. Thank you for the amazing poetry. I did enjoy this one.
Coyote

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend for reading 😊

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome my friend.

[Dara]

Sounds like paradise to me. You have painted a master piece with your words. I can almost feel like I am right in the middle of so much loveliness.

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend for reading. I have some tropical plants in my garden. I love gardening. Have a nice day 😊