Just a laugh

Laughter the best medicine...

Smiling a while makes your face glow
Laughing a while makes your face brighter
Laughing aloud makes you mad
Until the sunset, somewhere unknown
Is there any medicine to keep all alive
Until the sunrise, somewhere unknown
To laugh aloud, louder and louder
To live to be the happiest on this earth.
Sitting inside a madman's cave.

Reviews

[Ken Simm.]

George Bernard Shaw said “If you want to tell people the truth, make them laugh, otherwise they'll kill you.”
I think this message , or rather more than one message in your write serves to advance wisdom also. But in a better way. The wisdom of madmen.

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[Mauricio Montoya]

ive laugh and cried but never brighter to give us live a life is what we can be, the sun shine because it never give us light were in dark thank you for sharing.

[Mauricio Montoya]

but I love your thougth.

[Sami Khalil]

Laughter is a medicine 💊; we need it. It comes from a good state of mind.
You are emphasizing its importance.

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[JessyJacob]

I liked your trial of writing in Hindi shaayri, liked the words and rhythm, being impartial to light and night. Nikhaar rare word not in normal usage, nicely used.
If you want to laugh louder that makes you happy but it shouldn’t look paagalpan to others, then where you sit will not be a madman’s cave,

You can add last lines
But is it necessary to sit in a madman’s cave to look like an idiot or madman.

What makes your happy in life is not just laugh because people laugh even in sorrow
If you take poison and then you could laugh
It means it’s not happiness but it’s just survival of hardship.
Anyhow that looks glittering is not glass or diamond always, similarly that who is laughing is not always happiest in the world or what you say is madman. And madman doesn’t know what is happiness and sorrow, he just laughs no matter what like people who doesn’t understand joke but do make a jesture not to be looking off the group.

You need not to laugh every time to make yourself happier, for few hardship, to achieve goals and for few being proud to be of Nation, and for few being a mother, for it going through any challenges, and for few her man to live with and going through any tests, and for few being loved and loving truly are more laughter moments in their life. Just mere laugh really makes and feels everyone as if you are just a madman.

The way god is balancing the Sukh and dhukh, of any individual, is different. But when we see intricacies and go deeper it looks biased doing something partially more to unknowns only to make them learned and the other feels not even a single second you have taken her to your heart why didn’t you hug me or pat me is that you never wanted to touch me?? Even when seen the last time saying never going to be seen that close. Will that dying heart sleeps forever in peace?? Was it only do this for me who is what to you what makes difference??

I don’t know what to say these are me feelings.

You attempted nice trial of a great lesson and rythm making your point and things what makes you happiest.

Thank you for sharing,

Regards,
Jessy Jacob.

What is there in name in or any hardwork, who gets to eat is the one fittest I think in your theory, but I don’t believe in that a hardwork should be recognized and is the fittest like Charles Darwin.

Hope your empirical trial makes you happier and if you tried and made understood the actual one the stoichiometry then balance would have been better and best not a rework or Eduruleni thing, I mean never disregarded and nothing can defeat you.

I conclude by here,
Nothing in world so mean so dark so perfect if everyone is same and then is the end of Kali yug and now the Kritha Yuga the new beginning of four yugas, the cycle and revival, the inception…,

With love,
😊😊❤️❤️.

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend for detailed writings. Review. Fot my work.

[JessyJacob]

You are welcome, sure fot my work too.

[William Propsner]

Now THAT is funny! I like your ending.
To laugh, yet to be sane.

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend for reading my work 👍

[John the Baptist]

I did not know laughing aloud could make you either angry or mentally ill. I think it's rather pleasant.

[Arundass TP]

Thanks for review friend 😊

[Perdition]

The ever-piercing grip of life bleeding its way in throughout. A stance and release of that taste at the back of our existence, but in reality not. I know of such a cave but not the medicine shy of our ultimate fate...we steer the wheels into the past with this unconscious gap between a scream and laughter. Wonder what God does? How could we not be madmen at the end of the day? Smile on I guess. Enjoyed it~

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend

[Arundass TP]

Poem in Hindi language

थोड़ी देर मुस्कुराने से आपके चेहरे पर चमक आ जाती है
थोड़ी देर हंसने से चेहरे पर निखार आता है
जोर से हंसना आपको पाग�™ं बना देता है
सूर्यास्त तक, कहीं अज्ञात
क्या सभी को जीवित रखने की कोई दवा है?
सूर्योदय तक, कहीं अज्ञात
जोर-जोर से, जोर-जोर से और जोर-जोर से हंसना
इस धरती पर सबसे खुश रहने के �™िए जीना।
एक पाग�™ं की गुफा के अंदर बैठा हूँ.

[1809 Black Plague Decem..]

Dear Arundass TP,
smiling is a simple gesture,
but in a mad man's world is a dangerous one,
I'm so glad you captivate it well,
love the ending line, ----Maynard

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend for reviewing

[1809 Black Plague December]

you are most welcome, Dear, :)

[Jenni Bailey]

This poem is so sad, but very good

[Arundass TP]

Thanks friend 😊