Expecting the beyond

If I have vision in the darkness
I will never close my eyes

I I have power to hear the minute voices
I will never hear the louder versions

If I have speed breaking the limit
I never walks long distances

If I have power more than a dinosaur
I will break and throw away every obstacles

If I have power to fly
I will touch the limits beyond all reaches

If I have the thickest and hardest skin
I will be safe from all odds

If then, I am the God and devil of all on this earth...

Reviews

[Patricia]

Thee "if's"...if only... the list could be endless but you chose some very good ones. I am not sure what I would pick to make me feel like a god, I am not sure I would want that responsibility or even that feeling, maybe because I am getting older but it seems a bit too overwhelming. I used to dream of things like that but who doesn't when we are young, we want to experience that feeling. I find it a bit too ambitious for me, getting old and a bit lazy maybe :) Although the flying thing would be awesome! Nice writing!

[Arundass TP]

Thank you for reading my poem 😊

[Marvin Thomas Cox-Flynn..]

A fabulously thought provoking piece of philosophical Poetry ...

[Arundass TP]

Thank you visiting my profile. I am honoured

[Rijstervlaai]

Although somewhat iffy, the sentiments are touching. A few tweaks are needed though. 3rd line: typo, the "f" is missing, 4th line: suggest substitution of the word ones for "versions", 6th line: "walks" should not be plural and I think maybe there's a need for a verb, 8th line: either obstacle shouldn't be plural or perhaps all would be a more fitting word than "every".

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend for helping to correct errors. I will edit poem sooner.

[Zoe Richardson]

Wow! This so powerful. I think we all wonder what it would be like if we had such abilities. I try to remember that if I had the powers of the Almighty I would not need his grace. And then I would have to should all the worries, cares, and responsibilities of this world. I like your musings. You may be on to something!

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend for reviewing

[1809 Black Plague Decem..]

Hello, Arundaas TP,
I really love your poem.
The first line, is sustaining in depth in my mind,
all the stanzas intensifying to the unspeakable,
----great write! Maynard

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[1809 Black Plague December]

most welcome, Dear, :)

[W. Barrett Munn]

You make me think we are there already, gods and devils.

Winston

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[Dave Brown]

if we happen to meet by chance, I will endeavor to be especially polite

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[D. Mansfield]

I like this poem alot, nice job, thank you

[Arundass TP]

Thanks friend 😊

[Lydia Shutter]

Very interesting philosophical concepts. Lydia

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[Rev Edward McClelland]

Very perceptive. Good work!

[Arundass TP]

Thanks friend 😊