Touching the heart of unknown world

The world beyond our imagination. The world called Bi-polar.

The room I sit is the safest place;
Locked the door and windows;
Felt a holy light in darkness;
ICan see few persons in the dark;
Advice a lot; laughs a lot;
Life seems wonderful, colorful moreover vibrant;
This world is a collection of foolish icons;
Careful, extremely;
Until the moon rises in the night;

Reviews

[John the Baptist]

I worked with people with schizophrenia for many years and I can't recall any that would speak this way. Sounds more like the manic phase of bipolar disorder. On the other hand, who can tell what someone in a delusional state might say? On still another hand, schizophrenia as used here might be a metaphor for something else.

[Arundass TP]

Thanks for reviewing. Better I must change it to Bipolar instead of Schizophrenia. Ok. Thanks once more for pointing out errors.

[Neville]

I am very familiar with the world to which you refer .. an interesting take on a very serious matter .. Neville

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend ☺️

[Michelle Saldana]

Nice piece! I could understand the depth of discovering safety and refuge found within the room, where its vitality sharply contrasts with the materialistic societal norms of the outside world.

[Arundass TP]

Thanks for reviewing my poem

[Michelle Saldana]

Of course! :)

[Annette Pisano-Higley]

“Felt a holy light in darkness;
ICan see few persons in the dark; “
So authentic and enlightening ATP. We all see things in the dark, some on a different level than others. It is not for one to judge. Memorable write.

[Arundass TP]

Thanks for reviewing.

[Clif]

Sometimes people who have supernatural expereinces are thought to be crazy. Sometimes they are not.

[Arundass TP]

Thanks. It's real experiences that are individual.

[Sami Khalil]

An interesting way of looking at this medical condition; you say it can have other causes.
Wowzy woooo.

[Arundass TP]

Thanks ...surely.

[Sami Khalil]

Welcome...surely