Revenge

Some times, earth revenge

No where to go:
Nothing to do;
No one to hear;
In the abyss of darkness;
Thunder and lightening
Raining heavily;
Flooding;
Heavy winds;
Lost hope;
Floating on a log
Time seems infinite;
A helping hand;
Strange it seems
Saw nothing;
Heard only roar of earth
Shaking each human destiny.

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Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

These lines remind me how mother nature can turn and bite hard when we least expect it. She can be as a gentle as a whispered breeze on a summer day or as viscious as a tsunami destroying everything in its wake. Thank you for posting. Nice poetic description.

Chris

[Arundass TP]

Thanks friend

[W. Barrett Munn]

Seems verse right out of the headlines about Morocco.

Winston

[Arundass TP]

At present I feel so. Thank you friend 😊

[light and ashes]

Seeing this from a different perspective now,
maybe more like the way that you intended it to be.
Still a great write.


You have written some really quality pieces.

95/100

[Joram- Article Writer]

I love this poem; it is short and its message is clear. Some lines like "In the abyss of darkness" "Time seems infinite" "Shaking each human destiny" moved me a lot. Good job Arundass TP.

[Arundass TP]

Thanks. My friend.

[Joram- Article Writer]

Most welcome mate.

[ProphetsMother]

Are you talking about the nature of revenge and how it comes to us? I think revenge can feel good at times for some people but Ultimately leads to sadness and longing. Maybe the revenge is for God I try to walk away from situations as Karma or Ohrmazd or however you want to see it, will probably make it's way back around. As in no energy can be created or destroyed, I'm sure the nature of life will always balance things out for us.

[Arundass TP]

Thanks for reviewing in psychological perspective.

[Sami Khalil]

A powerful poem on nature and its revenge. Heed the warnings folks when you see the signs.

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome 😊

[light and ashes]

interesting. like getting lost in your own personal storm. which I'm sure we have all done at some point. Human beings cant help ourselves at least from time to time.
This is, in fact, very good...

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend

[light and ashes]

You are very welcome.

[Keith Jeffries]

I particularly liked the last two lines. Thank you for an excellent poem

[Novram]

Mother Earth is fighting back against man, because of all the pollution we cause and our destruction of the natural world. Good poem.

[William Michael Reeves]

The planet has good reason to be upset. And now tornados like just happened are going to more frequent. Nicely condensed gigantic idea!!
Bill

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend

[Coyote Poetry]

Revenge. Earth can and it does. We take and take from earth. One day, she won't need us. I liked and I agree with your words and thoughts. Thank you my friend for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome my friend.