Meditation

During meditation...

Inside dark cave,
In the abyss of darkness; relaxed;
Hanging Lantern on one hand;
The path seem's never ending;
Walked through strange path;
Experiencing vivid art forms;
Until the door's are opened;
Experiencing the first ray;
From the Sun God.

Reviews

[barleygirl]

I never experience anything like this associated with sleep, but this reminds me of meditation. Dark cave is the place where outside distractions are finally neutralized. Lantern is enlightenment sought. Vivid art forms is a state of mind where we process in imagery, not words. Finally, opening doors to the outside world again, hoping to be able to carry with me the light from the Sun God (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Arundass TP]

Thanks. Now I think I have to change title of this poem.

[barleygirl]

I can't believe you did! I feel honored!

[Arundass TP]

Thanks friend. You showed me right path

[Miss Sharon]

Nicely done. Good descriptive writing. ~Sharon

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend

[Annette Pisano-Higley]

"Experiencing the first ray;
From the Sun God."
Beautiful, spiritual odyssey of the mind. Hoping that light fills the world.

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend

[Dave Brown]

this brings to mind the extensive cave paintings recently found but as far as caves go, I am not a big fan, so I'm going to miss out on that Sun God but at almost any other location, I'll be glad to lay down and absorb what he has to offer

[Arundass TP]

Thanks friend

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I liked the line 'experiencing vivid art form' so poetic. Yes after a dark journey sun shines awaits for those who can strive. Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem

[Arundass TP]

Thanks friend

[jacob erin-cilberto]

I feel sometimes like I am traveling through life with only that small lantern
in my hand and heart.
And I am not seeing so well...too many shadows...gets creepy.
And I am claustrophobic on top of it.
this poem made me nervous...but I surely liked the metaphor.

[Arundass TP]

Be courageous