Walking Corpse

A man with no creativity; self-confidence; courage and altruistic.

when life values nothing;

barren; the mind behaves;

It's hell; the heart is cold;

never feels the true colors;

moving on this earth;

as Walking corpse!

Reviews

[Marie]

A cold heart is blocked and may just as well be dead, because though alive it is dead. Its doors never open to welcome anybody in. It becomes cruel, bitter, resentful and unloving. Very thought provoking write, T. P... SO much said in so few words. Thank you for sharing, dear poet...

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[Marie]

Welcome always, T. P...

[Ken Simm.]

I know someone like this. Not very well but it is so obviously not you my friend. Remarkable creativity if somewhat sad.

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[Stella Armour]

When life holds no interest anymore and all creativity has left then in a sense we are dead to the world whilst still breathing..

[Arundass TP]

Sure friend, that's a fact. Thank you for reading this simple poem. Have a nice day

[Stella Armour]

my pleasure, and enjoy your day too :)

[Marvin Thomas Cox-Flynn..]

Arundass,

I must say that I agree with this well written assessment our common Human reality, for if we fail to vlaue Life, then we fail to value living and having lived for all that it is worth the living for ... Profound words of philosophical wisdom here ...

Marve

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend

[light and ashes]

Unfortunately, I've been there...
like a zombie or walking corpse!!
Circumstances are everything.

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend

[light and ashes]

You are most welcome.

[Dennis Wolf]

Death comes in many different packages... Many different shapes and sizes.

I believe, that for one with convictions, death sets in only when one abandons those convictions, and walks about the world aimlessly..

For us.. Creative types death is like the seasons of the year used to be.. Part of the cycle.. In a way.

When death sets in, but doesn't stop whatever animation a body has... Then that person exists on the same level all those hungry ghosts do.
Nicely written.

[Arundass TP]

Thanks for an informative review

[Dennis Wolf]

No problem.

[Paul Bell]

Yeah, when the colour goes, life is sure to follow.
Some know when their time is up, some just prolong it.

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend

[Dave Brown]

this walking corpse or one of its brethren, keeps designating this as a malicious site, what with walking corpses doing what walking corpses' do
perhaps it is feeling maligned??
just a guess

[Arundass TP]

Thanks friend

[Pete]

very deep and philosophical. a person with nothing good inside is already dead. powerfully said ... :)

[Arundass TP]

Thanks friend

[Annette Pisano-Higley]

Yes exactly- a Dead Man Walking... You deliver this indictment with flair and passion. Your lines are profound. When life has no meaning, evil triumphs. Nicely written.

[Arundass TP]

Thanks friend