Concrete decision

Decisions once taken in a moment becomes destiny for some people

Concrete decision

However strong

strengthens it

erodes

as time passes

within yourself

in the last moment

realizing

it was a fault by default.

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Reviews

[Betty Hermelee]

sometimes we make snap decisions in a moment's time that later on we may regret; it's part of human nature....and looking back really won't help us change it..was this my intention? maybe and maybe not... i like the content of this poem and the writing is excellent TP!
Warmly, B

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[Betty Hermelee]

you're very welcome!
warmly, B

[Marvin Thomas Cox-Flynn..]

A great Philosopher dwells within you!

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend. Have a nice day.

[Kathy Van Kurin]

'concrete decision'
Arundass TP,
This was a fun read. Analyzing its meaning was where I found that your title gave the meaning. A choice or choices which become a solid foundation good/bad/inbetween for the future.
Kathy

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend for reading 🙂

[Marvin Thomas Cox-Flynn..]

Arundas TP,

This piece of philosophical Poetry speaks sage's words of wisdom as to the reality that we Humans make decisions we firmly conclude (at the time) are right, correct, righteous and just, to, then, later on in life relive in mediation's contemplation of, "Was that really the right thing to do, at the time?" ... Speaks to my heart and my life, is all I can say in saying that I enjoyed reading this fine Poem ...

Marve

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[barleygirl]

I have had a bad habit of re-thinking my decisions countless times, which is what your poem reminds me of. Sometimes we just have to pick a direction & stick with it, if only to stop the second-guessing so we can get on to the next thing in life! *wink! wink!* Fondly, Margie

[Arundass TP]

Thanks friend

[Einstein Noodle]

very clever twist on our decisions .. i like it .. me noodle is electrified .. one can think the soundness of a decision is never to be shaken .. but in the brilliance of brutal truth to find it was completely false .. oh my ... what a surprise .. i like the compact, straight forward presentation ... minimalism has a big impact when packaged surgically .. well done ... just a real mind twist to read for me.
E.

[Arundass TP]

Thanks friend

[jacob erin-cilberto]

I think so many make decisions allowing only for the black and white of it.
Instead, there is so much gray area...maybe they are afraid to go there.
they just want "neat"---but life gets sloppy and out of order sometimes...just the way it is.
I enjoy your writing and how it lets me delve into it.
j.

[Coyote Poetry]

I believe we decide our journey. Destiny can be changed by the movement of life. All things we do good or bad. We will pay for in the ending. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry. You made the reader ponder and think. The goal of the writer.
Coyote

[Arundass TP]

thank you friend

[Coyote Poetry]

I enjoyed your work and you are welcome.

[Cherrie Palmer]

I read your line -a fault by default, as someone unwilling to make a choice, so one is given you. Learning to decide on the fly is a skill worth developing.

[Arundass TP]

thank you friend.

[Finder]

"fault by default" is an extremely strong line and image cementing the idea of decision indeed being concrete in their nature. Strong expression of theme.

[Arundass TP]

thanks friend, for a good review on this poem.