When Love chained

O Love, let's fight for the realm of our love

When they stone us out of anger,

let's destroy them out of compassion

When they yell the story of hell fire,

let's heal the hearts that betrayed and abandoned

Our lives are in danger and

these could be the last days

So let's live together

'Cause the world as we see it today,

may not be the same tomorrow

Come, Let's destroy the fake Gods and

Unite for a religion of love!

Reviews

[APOORVA]

interesting one.
keep up the gud work

[Adam Adams]

quite an interesting poetry. liked your rhythmic flow ... and the take on such words as well.

[Anindita Janhabee]

The last part is as beautiful as flower and the whole poem sounds so euphonious to me...
Realm of love... religion of love...
perhaps, I don't believe much in god's but do believe in religion of humanity.
Humanity could be love to me but I do have certain things which deny my own feelings to flow..

apart from that, I loved the deep thoughts put in this poetry...
great job mister!!!

Anindita

[Shannon]

Beautiful and tragic. Are you open to suggestions on word choices?

[Arun MP]

Yes, I'm open to any suggestions. :D

[Shannon]

Such a small suggestion. "Unite for a religion...", instead unite in a religion. That last line still feels a little off as far as flow goes to me.