Adieu

There's no such thing in life
as happiness nor God
why shouldn't I let the knife
pierce into my heart and spill my blood?
I can no longer feel pleasure
luxuries in life are hollow
why should I live? There's no cure
and there's no one worthy to follow.

Ice cold dagger, I invite you
let your thrust dance with my last breath
cold blooded world, adieu
please enjoy watching my death.

Author's Note

Ignore bad grammar, if any.

Reviews

[TamiViolet]

I hope this one is creative writing and not true to life, my friend. I think so many of us go through times where we no longer feel pleasure, etc. The feeling usually passes though... The second stanza is intense, especially the brilliant metaphor of the thrust dancing with the last breath.

[deeps]

Wow! This is really taking it to the raw point!
Like this alot!