I Fell In Love With Someone Called Death

Dedicated dearly to Beth (not Death), the best nurse on Earth.

I once thought I had everything I wanted
until I met this girl who stole my breath
she was beautiful, gorgeous, would she talk to me?
I doubted,
would she listen? or would she slap me instead?
her eyes, her shadow, her poise
the mystery which engulfs her, I love it!
her lips, her bosom, but her voice?
I'm lying down, no sounds I emit.

She came to me one night
I was fully dosed, under meds
locked in the hospital, not alright
and I fell in love with someone called death.

Author's Note

Ignore bad grammar, if any.

Reviews

[funeralmoon]

wow this is... amazing.. this is utterly stunning. the ending hits you that the person has been consumed with love for death.. very addictive and poisionous love indeed.. wonderful imagery. :D

[deeps]

This is quite the write here,
I'd say it's love that took your breath away.
To lie down and let love consume the soul
To die within a thousand deaths!
I like this I thought it was a wonderful write.