I Love You

Few words to describe what I feel about you
just a short sentence to surrender my soul
and a new dream to pursue
this lady, to whom I shall give all
never have I dreamt of such beauty
never have I felt this way
a solitary man in the city
living alone each and every day.

I love you
I wish you'd understand
I only love you
would you like to take my hand?

Author's Note

Ignore bad grammar, if any.

Reviews

[A Risen Heroine.]

This poem's short and sweet.
It's direct to the point and very well written!
Very well done.

~A Fallen Heroine~

[Wicahpi]

Short, sweet and I'd say, directly to the point! Very nicely executed. Kudos!

[Vesa Lee]

There is no bad grammar to be ignored, and in fact you've expressed yourself quite wonderfully.
It seems to me that you are the last of the true romantics...
A mind so full of love that everything you write savors strongly of it. ;)
Sweet, but not in a silly childish way. More in a deep, innocent way.
Magnificent. This was thoroughly enjoyed.