Words weave sounds into magic
quiet we call for our slavery
we claim we're old, we say we're sick
I call it stupid, you call it bravery
not anymore, a fresh start is required
file all old memories, let them go
if freedom should be acquired
let there be no judgement, no foe.
New age renaissance is coming
not a moment too soon nor too late
I can hear it as a humming
let us all patiently wait.
Interesting poem - I understand the main idea and the moral of the poem, but I'll probably have to read it a few times to fully get everything. XD Nice job, this was an entertaining read. :)
Nice; yet it might bee a little too idealistic, potent, and complex for simple minded people... they might just not get it ... what a shame. If asked to describe the poem using one word I would say: "demanding", sounds to me like there is a huge need of change and I agree.
CHALLANGE: try writing something as demanding as this, but use emotions describe feelings, sensations... like the urge for things to be different or disgust provoked by society (those feelings are mine, I am just using them as an example) it would add power to the piece and i would LOVE to read it.
You Are Romanticism
You are likely to see the world as it should be, not as it is.
You prefer to celebrate the great things people do... not the horrors they're capable of.
For you,.. more..